please review my blog

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  1. #1
    here
    my blog
    comment in my blog are welcome
    :)
     
    paktono, Jul 25, 2009 IP
  2. selinangela

    selinangela Peon

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    #2
    It's nice!
     
    selinangela, Jul 25, 2009 IP
  3. bigtime2

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    #3
    There isn't much to comment on. It's a brand new blog.
    Your search box does not have a search button. Unless, thats something else? I personally dont like having Meta links on my sites, so I'd remove that. I thing you should remove that. Logo, is that the logo that came with the WordPress theme, because it looks familiar. I'd recommend creating a new logo. That huge picture on top of the page is a picture of some sort of berries. It is a blog about business investing, shouldn't you have a pic of some stock quotes, or a businessmen shaking hands, a blackberry, a high rise building? You should have more than just Home and About links up on top. I'd add a few more. Edit the original Hello World post. I wouldnt have the whole article on the main page, I would just have a paragraph and "Read more..." link for the rest of the article.
     
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  4. paktono

    paktono Peon

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    #4
    thanks for your comment
     
    paktono, Jul 25, 2009 IP
  5. rockyg

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    #5
    I started reading it but had to stop because the blog posts read like they were articles spun by some automatic script. I'm not sure if English is your native language or if you're simply spinning articles, but (and no insult intended!) if you're going to try get English speakers reading your blog, you have to write in good english. Be well worth your time having another English speaker give a once over to your articles, as the points you make are good, its just your grammer lets the article down. Hope this helps!
     
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    #6
    nice aesthetics, just needs some more articles.
     
    kaioken89, Jul 25, 2009 IP
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    #7
    I agreed. Even if you are using article spinner it should be of good quality and worth while like word flood.

    As far as your website is consern,

    Its good, load quickly, easy to navigate, need brushing (a little bit).
    Add some valuable content and monetise it (adsense).
     
    samy321, Jul 25, 2009 IP
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    #8
    your content don't represent your web header....
     
    wellnux, Jul 25, 2009 IP
  9. kunnusingh

    kunnusingh Well-Known Member

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    i don't like because your blog is not like a professional or atleast simple. contents are diffrent
     
    kunnusingh, Jul 26, 2009 IP
  10. Nokiasony.com

    Nokiasony.com Member

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    Good website. Keep on adding more articles.
     
    Nokiasony.com, Jul 26, 2009 IP
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    Need to work out on Design.
     
    samuel007, Jul 27, 2009 IP
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    RadioBounce Banned

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    Hello, it's a nice blog. I've seen this theme software and agree that you should change the image of berries since it's a business blog. You should add more links up top instead of just two.

    I guess the search boz is alright without a search button of some sort, most people who use the Internet would press enter anyway. Maybe you could put like a icon of a magnifying glass beside it, really small just to make it a little more obvious. :)
     
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    yes Atahualpa its very nice :p
     
    phangan, Jul 27, 2009 IP
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    #14
    change the theme and post more content
     
    amol.gupta, Jul 28, 2009 IP
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    Use another template for this topic especially and do not use an automated article rewriter...
     
    brandon93s, Jul 28, 2009 IP