Looks good, can you just add a few more transactions and make each frame last more (maybe 5 times more)? Thanks
The third one is great. Can you just make the transaction more gradual in the random numbers in the back, in the top and bottom part of the banner (see below)? I really like the font in the first line but please try other "clean-looking" ones for the second line. PS: please send new versions as another post rather than editing an old one, or I won't get notified and I'll risk not noticing them at all--thanks! EDIT: instead of doing that, could you keep the same background but simply increase the banner's height to cover everything, so that you can put the background there too and avoid the problem of the transitions that way? I think that would look better. Don't change the font size or anything, it's just to avoid the problem of the sudden transition in the background. Thanks!
This is revision1 revision2 revision3 revision4 - Might be too busy, but still conveys the idea of randomness
Can you try with anagrams? Just build the various frames by changing the order of the letters in each line. Thanks!
Nice, but can you scramble the words on both lines and without differentiating between letters and numbers? Like this: 001Random01 1Thoughts1110 1mR0ad1o0n1 hs01T0og10tu 1010adRomn1 t101hgo1s0Tu 01am1Rn1do0 g1h0tsT11out mR1a0dno1m 11shT01ugto1 etc... you get the idea. Also please make each frame last a lot more, around 10 seconds, and try a few different transitions. Thanks!
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They both look great! If you could just try out other similar fonts for the second line (see previous feedback) that would be great. Also can you try submitting something for the smaller banner? If this alright with you all, in case I choose two different designers for the small and the big banner, the first will get $7-10 and the second the remaining $20-23, the exact amount depending on the work you put it and the end result. If I had to choose right now it would be $23 to pheonix89 or technoguy for the big banner and $7 to either JacoArmy or 5starpix for the small one.