Please review my website

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  1. #1
    Hi friends.
    i want to be reviewed my meoshtelioma blog. please review it and give me the suggestions to improve it.

    Mesothelioma Blog
     
    jamshed_11946, Jun 26, 2009 IP
  2. Shay-Solomon

    Shay-Solomon Peon

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    #2
    nice ... but to mcuh black in the eyes.
     
    Shay-Solomon, Jun 26, 2009 IP
  3. mspider

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    #3
    You need some photo in the header because the blacknes kills the whole site.
     
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    #4
    There is too much text and no graphic, I would recommend to make some logo or picture so it looks more friendly
     
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  5. rumaliya

    rumaliya Banned

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    #5
    in this site text is more but nomuch is graphics..........
     
    rumaliya, Jun 26, 2009 IP
  6. SpamHat

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    #6
    Nice but no graphics.

    Just get a free stock image - at least 500px wide and put it at the start of each post.

    It will bring new life to the design.
     
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  7. jamshed_11946

    jamshed_11946 Peon

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    oh. allmost all the reviewers are saying to put an image. so, now I am going to find an image compatible with my blog. thanks but need more suggestions
     
    jamshed_11946, Jun 26, 2009 IP
  8. voxmic

    voxmic Active Member

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    #8
    i agree with thenilan
    site is very acctractive and try to put more images..
     
    voxmic, Jun 26, 2009 IP
  9. designX

    designX Banned

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    #9
    You will Try to add Nice logo and header too...Overall its nice site .
     
    designX, Jun 26, 2009 IP
  10. nj2k2k1

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    #10
    The overall design is good, I like the colors for your topic.

    As others have mentioned, you really need a header - you should remove the first large block of google ads at the top and put the header there - with ads that prominent you risk looking like a link-farm

    The text looks like it was written by an article spinner... and not a very good one...
    for example, the title of the current blog post:
    "Mesothelioma Prevention 26 Expectations Interesting Knowledgebase"
    I think you need to invest in a good writer to hand-spin articles

    Instead of the ad for MMO games at the bottom of the site, how about an ad for something medical or legal - it would fit your topic better and therefore get better click-through rates.

    I would personally try to add a somewhat related picture to each post - the post for Book should really have an image of the cover of the book, for example.

    Your "earn money" ads aren't in english - even though your website is... if you are going to place ads, they should be in the same language as your target audience.

    hope this helps :)
     
    nj2k2k1, Jun 26, 2009 IP
  11. jamshed_11946

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    #11
    friends. i have added a header image that looks better as compared before. now i will try to explain the matters with pictures.
    Special thanks to nj2k2k1 for his valuable suggestions.
     
    jamshed_11946, Jun 27, 2009 IP
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    #12
    Looks good, nice one!
     
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  13. jamshed_11946

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    #13


    thanks for appreciation. want more suggestions
     
    jamshed_11946, Jun 28, 2009 IP
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    #14
    I don't like the color. Its my personal opinion.
     
    sandeep211499, Jun 28, 2009 IP
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    #15
    looks good nice one
     
    giyar, Jun 28, 2009 IP
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    #16
    everything is ok, but I think that you should change the theme, into something lighter, like the green color for example, because it's too dark
     
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    #17
    great site,
    but remove the ad from header
     
    kbabi, Jun 28, 2009 IP
  18. jamshed_11946

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    #18

    ok. but which theme would be better for me. would you like to point to the theme more compatible with my website???


    but why???
     
    jamshed_11946, Jun 28, 2009 IP
  19. jamshed_11946

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    #19
    guys. earning is little a bit dropped. what is wrong here??please review again
     
    jamshed_11946, Jun 29, 2009 IP
  20. rajeelkp

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    #20
    Hmmmm,

    Let me be frank.I had heared that the 'meoshtelioma' is a keyword which values up to 20-30$ per click.And by seeing your site, i came to know that you had created the blog, just for google adsense.It's not a good policy. :(
     
    rajeelkp, Jun 29, 2009 IP