I've been promoting affiliate products for a few months now but the result have been hot and cold. I figure out maybe it's because of the my presell words. How do you write a good presell copy so i can warm up the buyers?
Here is a list of ACTION words to convert your visitors into buyers. 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I find myself wondering the same sort of thing with a new site I'm wanting to build. I think what we need to strive for is an introduction somewhere between informational and a "sales letter" .. probably more toward a sales letter. I'm pretty much a rookie at this, but I would think we need: 1 - A good and brief attention grabbing headline. The pros say that the only purpose of a headline is to make the reader read the sub-heading. 2 - A sub heading that is actually better than the headline. It does the heavy lifting by making potential customer read your benefits and features 3 - Point out the benefits and features of your product or service with a few testimonials added in. 4 - Write a strong call to action and offer the best guarantee with which you feel comfortable. Look at the top sales letters for Clickbank ebooks to get some form and function ideas. Reading good copywriting forums will give you some ideas as well.