Hi All I have been working on www.drivingtestangel.com with a friend, and we would really appriciate any constructive criticism which would help improve our conversion rate. Thanks, Brew
If it was me, I would stretch the page out a tad bit. I just feel it is bit too narrow for my liking. Also, the font is all the same and nothing "jumps" out at you. I like the sale page and I wouldn't change the wording. I don't know how I feel about the gray background lol I want to say change it but don't know to what. I also don't like red, black and blue color schemes. Go into Publisher or PowerPoint and look at the color schemes they have. They aren't good for creating web pages of course but I have used those programs to help get an idea of some color schemes that just flow together. Good luck with it and it has great potential. Just some design changes and it will make it stand out from any competition you may imo.
So many text, I couldn't complete reading. I would appreciate more pictures and bigger spacing between paragraphs and lines.
Yes wayyyy to much info on the landing page....also where are the h2-h5 tags? And the alt tags for images?
I feel that having your purchase link point to ejunkie instead of direct to paypal or within your url takes away on its appearance of credibility
All good points made so far, especially the "more white space" comment & pay link. Content looks good. There are a couple of things that could benefit you: 1. make all of your "download/order now" active links. Why wait until the end of your sales letter. Give folks plenty of opportunity to buy You could even track which part of your sales letter pulls people the most by adding a unique code/extension... 2. opt-in box. Without one you're losing out on potential sales to the same customers if & when you develop other products related to this one OR for those who might pass on your stellar offer now but might still be interested. Use it for your "Free Bonus" offer (or maybe a different but related free bonus). 3. Not critical but might increase sales: a few video testimonials... I noticed you put your email address on the web site. I'd suggest you use a "Contact" or "Support" link instead to thwart spammers who use email harvesting programs. Best of luck on your product Brewster! That's a pretty creative use of holosync/audio technology! ZM
Way too much text. You might need to break-up the flow. Try providing the detail information on inside pages.
I love how some posters say "way too much text" in these kinds of threads. It's not, but lazy people, people who don't read, think it is. Lazy, non-readers rarely buy.
Tweak that well and I think it could make you some money. Never seen an ebook for this niche before. Are you gonna use Clickbank?
It looks quite good in my opinion. Are you using a basic template or has it been created from scratch?