Please review my Online Store

Discussion in 'Websites' started by ma3316, Jun 9, 2009.

  1. #1
    This site is very simple. But i don't know, is the site most powerfull for business?

    www.1stopbiztools.com

    Please give me some feed back :)
     
    ma3316, Jun 9, 2009 IP
  2. NathanCH

    NathanCH Well-Known Member

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    #2
    Well, I hate to be so critical on someone's new site, but the layout just isn't very good. It looks VERY outdated. It seems like you have decent content, but the website looks like it was pulled straight out of the late 90s.

    I would consider looking at other online stores such as www.apple.com/store.
     
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  3. ma3316

    ma3316 Active Member

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    #3
    Thanks for your review bro. I think maybe layout should change too.
     
    ma3316, Jun 9, 2009 IP
  4. Petro_

    Petro_ Well-Known Member

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    #4
    1. You need new logo and header.
    2. Everything looks very small.
    3. Need some more space.
     
    Petro_, Jun 9, 2009 IP
  5. BlueCheri

    BlueCheri Peon

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    #5
    I agree with Petro
    You need a good logo,
    A nice layout,and good color comb will work!
    Good luck
     
    BlueCheri, Jun 9, 2009 IP
  6. gangwar4e

    gangwar4e Greenhorn

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    #6
    Hi

    You site is looking very congested, need to improve your site theme and make more space

    One more thing which I have noticed

    Make your site SEO friendly

    Second thing try to write unique title and metas for your all pages.

    Thx
     
    gangwar4e, Jun 9, 2009 IP
  7. mzet

    mzet Peon

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    #7
    Hey,

    1) new logo
    2) i think the categories on the left bit small. try to increase the font
     
    mzet, Jun 10, 2009 IP
  8. stdy

    stdy Peon

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    #8
    the colors seems wrong bro , and yeah , you need a more decent logo :)
     
    stdy, Jun 10, 2009 IP
  9. vbdesigner

    vbdesigner Peon

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    #9
    get a new logo mate lolz
     
    vbdesigner, Jun 10, 2009 IP
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    hpower Peon

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    #10
    you need to increase your site width!
     
    hpower, Jun 10, 2009 IP
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    .grey. Peon

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    #11
    Looks outdated. too plain
    Needs a new logo. too simple.
    Needs a new design.
    good luck!
     
    .grey., Jun 10, 2009 IP
  12. Brill

    Brill Peon

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    #12
    like doorway.
    very easy. like 1999.
     
    Brill, Jun 10, 2009 IP
  13. bluebenz

    bluebenz Well-Known Member

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    #13
    yup, a standard default design using Oscommerce..
    base on my experience, site design is not a 100% factor to be a succesfull website (in profit)..

    if this is your 1st site then keep moving.
    don't put too much attention on your design.
    the most important is how to market.

    Good luck with your site !!
     
    bluebenz, Jun 10, 2009 IP
  14. OrdinaryZen

    OrdinaryZen Peon

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    Looks Good to me! Just a few changes for some more pizazz! Good luck!
     
    OrdinaryZen, Jun 10, 2009 IP
  15. bizzysizzyf

    bizzysizzyf Peon

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    #15
    You should remove adsense ads. Your potential customer will click ad and buy on your competitors website.
    Loosing a sale for few cents...
     
    bizzysizzyf, Jun 10, 2009 IP
  16. inspire_08

    inspire_08 Well-Known Member

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    #16
    such a nice store...
     
    inspire_08, Jun 11, 2009 IP