Criticize my article please.

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    GK Awadhiya.
     
    gk_awadhiya, Jul 24, 2006 IP
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  2. Sheetal Dadhwal

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    very informative, broke many illusions on affiliates.............. but are u welcoming criticism on sentence structure?
     
    Sheetal Dadhwal, Jul 25, 2006 IP
  3. gk_awadhiya

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    #3
    Thanks for your reply. Yes I welcome criticism on sentence structure, spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes as I am from non English speaking country. I want to correct all the errors.

    Thanks again.
     
    gk_awadhiya, Jul 25, 2006 IP
  4. bill00

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    Informative, short, descriptive.
     
    bill00, Jul 25, 2006 IP
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    #5
    Hello - some basic grammar changes:

    Affiliate Programs – Some Facts

    Undoubtedly, affiliate programs are one of the best attractions on the Internet, particularly for people who are new to affiliate business. Thousands of people feel affiliate programs are an easy way to earn money with little or no effort.

    Actually, many people don't know what these programs are; some of them don't know what to do so that the programs work; some of them try the affiliate programs and fail. Most of them never analyse what they were doing wrong and why the program was a failure.
    People generally join thousands of affiliate programs, put banners and links everywhere they can, then sit back and start day-dreaming that $100 to $300 a day will fall into their lap.
    Few people actually succeed in earning money with affiliate programs.
    So, first of all know the facts:
    To join any Affiliate Program is very easy as most of them are free, you just have to register.
    But to be a successful affiliate is hard.
    Don't believe that money comes easily.
    You have know how the affiliate programs work.
    You have to work hard. You must have proper dedication, determination and devotion to achieve your goals.
    To earn a good living from affiliate income can take several months (even years). There are bound to be times when you fail, and times when you succeed, just like any business.

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    Hope that helps with the rest of your article. Otherwise, it's not bad. Some very good facts that hopefully make people realise they need to work to achieve.
     
    Entrepreneur Jon, Aug 1, 2006 IP
  6. highflyer

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    #6
    There's a lot of great information, but you really need to work on your sentence structure. And there are a lot of sentences which could've been written in a better way.

    "I am just telling about the facts." could be changed to: I am just introducing/enlightening you to the facts.

    "And the fun is that, most of them never analyze what they were doing and why there was a failure,” would sound a little better if you wrote: The funny thing is most people don’t even work on deciphering the causes of their premature failure.

    Good Luck. Before you can write professionally, I believe you need to take some good English classes to get the basics right.
    I would've corrected the whole article but I’m a little busy at the moment. If you need any help in the future, do let me know! =)
     
    highflyer, Aug 2, 2006 IP
  7. gk_awadhiya

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    I thank all of you for your comments and try my best to improve my writing and English both.

    GK Awadhiya
     
    gk_awadhiya, Aug 21, 2006 IP
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    anthonyn Well-Known Member

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    Kindly work on your grammer part.I am of the same opinion as you have about Affiliate Program.I have spend a lot of money on creating my own website with affiliate links.I am still dreaming to earn money.My website link is www.payingsystem.com/us and payingsystem.com/uk
     
    anthonyn, Oct 12, 2006 IP
  9. UCmEbUtuJuStdOnTCaRE

    UCmEbUtuJuStdOnTCaRE Banned

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    #9
    Short yet very informative, and very well said.
     
    UCmEbUtuJuStdOnTCaRE, Oct 14, 2006 IP
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    The info is fine, however, an informed person should not be avoiding, but anticipating and proacting. Participate in the programs but find the right ones before :) Good luck!
     
    Kassi, Nov 16, 2006 IP