[ $105 US ] Tobacco manufacturer Logo and Business Card

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by roy77, May 30, 2009.

  1. chemicalinck

    chemicalinck Well-Known Member

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    #21
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  2. manzanvil

    manzanvil Peon

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    #22
    Here are some revisions. You'll notice the Hookah is reversed in one of the images..... I had trouble deciding which looked better.

    The business card first, then the label, then the label on a jar.

    I also made the business card gradient a little lighter than the label.


    Thanks.


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  3. Neonic

    Neonic Member

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  4. paladin884

    paladin884 Active Member

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    #24
    Some revision

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    Feedback will be appreciated..
     
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  5. CHSajid

    CHSajid Well-Known Member

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    #25
    Hi,

    Another revision:
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    Kind Regards,
    CHSajid
     
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  6. manzanvil

    manzanvil Peon

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    #26
    Labels with fruit....


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  7. roy77

    roy77 Active Member

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    #27
    Hey Guys - 2night my partner and I will respond to each new entry separately, but I must say that I am loving all the entries. Each one just blows my mind! It gonna be hard deciding...
     
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  8. Xdexter

    Xdexter Well-Known Member

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    #28
    Neonic

    nice design you have there! hope you win!

    gudluck2all
     
    Xdexter, Jun 2, 2009 IP
  9. katesrobyn

    katesrobyn Notable Member

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    #29
    feedback on my new entry?
     
    katesrobyn, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  10. roy77

    roy77 Active Member

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    #30
    Hey guys sorry about the delay... By 2moro night I will give you feedback. My partner and I just did not have time to sit down and look everything over in great detail.

    Thank you!
     
    roy77, Jun 4, 2009 IP
  11. spearhead

    spearhead Peon

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    #31
    Here is another design. Waiting feedback:)
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  12. thekingofkings

    thekingofkings Peon

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    #32
    I don't think It's worth me trying after such a nice entry;) Good luck
     
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  13. erickastar

    erickastar Greenhorn

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    #33
    wow ive seen some nice designs it will be tough for him to chose a winner.
     
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  14. spearhead

    spearhead Peon

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    #34
    Personally speaking, no offence here, but this is one of the worst entries (personal opinion!) Design is subjective thing:p

     
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  15. thekingofkings

    thekingofkings Peon

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    #35
    I don't want to completely hijack the thread. But I'd respectfully say while taste is subjective, a good design is still a good design... regardless of personal taste.

    Just from an aesthetic viewpoint, as a smoker, given I saw all the proposed designs on a tobacco packet - I realise this isn't what the designs are - Chemicals would be the product that'd get my interest.

    The design is well executed, professional and has an underlying upermarket feel.

    Don't take my views as an insult lol. By complimenting one design I'm not trying to attack or put down anyone elses.
     
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  16. paladin884

    paladin884 Active Member

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    #36
    I think the last revision :d..

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    Feedback will be appreciated

    Regards
    paladin884
     
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  17. roy77

    roy77 Active Member

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    #37
    SpearHerd - Thank you for your entry. I like it - you followed the instructions for the contest and did everything properly. Your design is a bit too much middle easter (if you know what i mean). Our objective is to creative a logo, as TheKingOfKings said, which will appeal to the American market.

    The king of kings -thank you for your opinion. Chemical's design is actually in our top three picks. Your feedback is much appreciated!
     
    roy77, Jun 4, 2009 IP
  18. manzanvil

    manzanvil Peon

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    #38
    so now you're buying what the king of kings opinion is with his 37 posts and his 0 iTrader.....

    yea valuable....

    that's the one he'd buy.....

    I agree with SpearHead.

    Contest Holders here amaze me.
     
    manzanvil, Jun 6, 2009 IP
  19. thekingofkings

    thekingofkings Peon

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    #39
    Yeah, because my lack of posts and non-existant iTrader rating makes my opinion any less void than your own.

    There's nothing more amazing than spiteful and insecure people who are angered by compliments in the direction of entries that aren't there own.

    I'm sure If i complimented your entry you'd attack my views? Or, maybe not.:rolleyes:
     
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  20. manzanvil

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    #40
    No.... as a contest holder I just wouldn't find your opinion valuable.
     
    manzanvil, Jun 6, 2009 IP