review my 2 blogs and comment me to improve it better

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  1. #1
    Hi,
    i welcome heartily everybody here on DP, who review my blog and let me know with the comments to improve it better.

    finance

    health

    thanks in advance.
     
    manish.bryan, May 10, 2009 IP
  2. R2-D2™

    R2-D2™ Peon

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    #2
    Finance blog seems a bit plain but its ok, perhaps add something down the right?

    Health blog is too spread out, compact it a bit more to make it look organized, good work overall though.
     
    R2-D2™, May 11, 2009 IP
  3. manish.bryan

    manish.bryan Peon

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    #3
    thanks for the valuable comments.
    i would be happy to get few more reviews and comments.
    thanks!
     
    manish.bryan, May 12, 2009 IP
  4. Algavinn

    Algavinn Guest

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    #4
    The finance blog does look very clean and I like your continued use of fitting pictures (on both sites) but as R2D2 said, it does look somewhat plain with so much open space on the sides. I would like to see some links to relevant other sites, or some kind of additional information. Adding some more google links might be a good way to fill out the site and possibly generate some income for you.

    The health blog looks largely well done and is a lot more filled out, though I am seeing some random blank spaces between some of the posts and it is a bit distracting. Also many of the posts have pictures but many don't. These relevant images help each post feel more filled out and complete. Try to keep posts from being too short or looking insubstantial.
     
    Algavinn, May 12, 2009 IP
  5. Gavenecko

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    #5
    The finance blog is clean, which is great! but it does seem too compact. The health blog is also nice, but its too expanded! Also, I would really recommended improving your overall content. I instantly noticed spelling errors, which will discourage future visitors.
     
    Gavenecko, May 12, 2009 IP
  6. manish.bryan

    manish.bryan Peon

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    #6
    Hi,
    ya'll!
    thanks algavinn and gavenecko for giving me a good piece of advice. i must tell you that i am very new to blogger and i am not sure how can i manage the compactness of my blog. i already tried many template but none of them working as you guys said.
    do let me know, so i can make it better.
    i am really thankful for paying this much attention on my blog,though i did not expect it.
    thanks in advance!
     
    manish.bryan, May 12, 2009 IP
  7. xhunter

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    #7
    health blog is nice content,only template not so good i thinks..
     
    xhunter, May 13, 2009 IP
  8. lifenetwork

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    #8
    The health blog is very nice to look and informatics. The Finance blog needs some extra time to make nice, any way, good blogs.
     
    lifenetwork, May 13, 2009 IP
  9. manish.bryan

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    #9
    hey, thanks for you all who had me a great support.
    i am also looking to know that how may i change the template because whenever i tried to change them they just reflect with some other color or looks, nothing seriously changed with the compactness, see they are not spread over the full page, and i guess that it should be.

    looking to get the help soon..
    thanks for everbody again!
     
    manish.bryan, May 13, 2009 IP
  10. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #10
    The both blogs are simple and clean and they need a good template.There are some spelling mistakes that i found instantly which should be corrected for the arrival of future visitors.Thanks for your effort done.
     
    netdriver788, May 13, 2009 IP
  11. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #11
    I think the blog looks not so good in 100% width because the content is too low and also there is lot of spaces are wasted, just compress it..
     
    2advance, May 13, 2009 IP
  12. manish.bryan

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    Hi,
    i haven't got any good information,yet.
    i am looking to know the template that can bring a good look to my blog.
    drop me the URL, if you wanna recommend me to download from a website.
    thanks in advance!
     
    manish.bryan, May 13, 2009 IP
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    #13
    Both of the sites look too plain and simple.
    They both have too much wasted space.
    Add more valuable and more meaningful articles.
    good luck.
     
    drdavisjr, May 14, 2009 IP
  14. DnWebMarketplace

    DnWebMarketplace Banned

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    #14
    Hi Bryan, I saw your finance site is good at content, very informative, but your sidebar look ugly, I saw big...big an empty space, why not redesign this section mate ?
    And for your health blog, once again, you have a good article, but you still have same problems here, empty space :) but this all is just my suggest mate :)

    Andy :)
     
    DnWebMarketplace, May 14, 2009 IP
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    Hi mate
    health bolg is better and nice
    and better to use the whole page in finance blog.
     
    wprex, May 14, 2009 IP
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    #16
    By the way! better to add some graphics on headers!
     
    wprex, May 14, 2009 IP
  17. manish.bryan

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    #17
    Hi,
    guys!
    i received tons of comments but nobody ever explain me that how i remove these spaces and put graphics on header.
    i think it'd a great informatiion for me..
    thanks in advance..
     
    manish.bryan, May 22, 2009 IP
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    #18
    The big white spaces are iframes and is supposed to be some sort of advertisement. Did you put Google ads there or have some sort of function that does this?

    I'm not familiar with the system you are using but there is a lot of documentation concerning templates.
    http://help.blogger.com/bin/topic.py?hl=en&topic=12450
     
    HomeComputerGames, May 22, 2009 IP
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    Hi,
    homecomputergames,
    yeah, i tried the Google ad sense, and there was ads from the Google. since the Google unapproved the request, it becomes the way you can see now.
     
    manish.bryan, May 22, 2009 IP
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    #20
    Try to get good templates at eblogtemplates(dot)com. Templates are so plain and simple.. Not attractive at all.
     
    udmspace, May 22, 2009 IP