Hi all, I have launched a new wedding guide eBook, Please take a look at my page - www.thebibleofthebride.com And tell me what you think about it? Is that going to sell me some copies? P.S ClickBank still did not approve my product, I’m not sure why but it’s almost 2 month now from The day I accepted the status “Approval Requestedâ€.. Can someone help me understand what I’m doing wrong or is that the usual time for accepting the approval ? Thanks in advance, Barak
Hi There are some recommended changes to your page: The first line of words, in the headline, which are red, have a spelling mistake (Discover how tied the knot...). Replace with an "I" between how and tied. This is not a good first impression on a potential buyer. Check the page thoroughly for spelling errors. You explain the solution too early and tell them that the product is a guide in the second sentence. This top headline should capture the audience. You can explain more about the guide later on down the page. For example, the top headline should capture the visitor, the have a solution for there problem, then lead into the promotion. I suggest hiring a copywriter, who will do the page professionally. Graphics are good though As for why it didn't get approved, email ClickBank and ask as to why this is the case. Hope this helps you
one of the clickbank policy is 60 days money back guarantee I assume,but you didn't mention it. read their T&C properly before you re-request
Looks quite good, but I would suggest few changes: 1. The header is too long. Try to make a short one, but capture their attention 2. The page is a bit too wide, which makes it difficult to read. Try narrowing it a little
You have to pay to have it listed in the marketplace... Clickbank will usually send you an email with a payment link in within 2 weeks after you submit the product for approval. If they haven't done, email them and ask what the status of your application is.
Thanks for you honest opinion, I will add the 60 days money back guarantee to my page, As for the product approval, I have sent couple of email to ClickBank support team but unfortunately none Of them got replay back I was wondering perhaps the reason ClickBank does not approve me product is found in my thank you page. I have inserted the following link into the my product page -> thank you page address - http://www.thebibleofthebride.com/return/returnurl.php Is that the right address to use here? Or - http://www.thebibleofthebride.com/thankyoupage.php will be the right link to use in? I’m really confused, my developer told me we’ve to use the first link in order to capture the user details and hence to send him an email with the user + passwords For downloading the product and prevent stealing.
Hey, do you know where i could hire a copywriter Sorry for stealing post for a sec but didnt think was worth starting a new thread.
Start a new thread in "Content" Category in DP forum. You get more freelancers @ $1 per 100 words. Do select them based on iTrader. You can hire a copywriter from different freelancing sites also like scriptlancing.com. getafreelancer.com.
Guys please stay focused in my thread...you're sorry but I'm not being answered.. As for your question - "I cant open your site with IE or FireFox. Are you changing something to it?" The first link won't open till you buy via ClickBank payment system , and my question was what will be the right link to use in? - http://www.thebibleofthebride.com/return/returnurl.php - http://www.thebibleofthebride.com/thankyoupage.php Which of one will be the right link to insert into the thank you page.
no one really helped me.. please check out my previous post and tell me If I'm doing something wrong here? why I'm not getting the "Accept" sign from ClickBank?
I like the overall design, I would just work a little more on convincing the visitor why they need this book (consequences of what could go wrong without the proper knowledge). As for your question with the thank you page, CB will redirect to whatever page you want them to go to, so it doesn't make any difference. I would recommend changing the name to "transactioncompleted" or something other thankyoupage because with a name that generic people can simply guess the URL.
Thank you But in order to download the book,you have to enter user + passwords that you'll receive only after you payed using ClickBank payment system..so that's not my issue. I really don't know why ClickBank is not getting me approved???
In the product page, there's a green button that says "Submit this product" to the left of your product description. Make sure you have this clicked, or the product will never go to Clickbank officials.
Also - if you've already done this, then contact them, because they usually only take a few days - even if it's a "no".
Hi, Thank you! The problem was they never said yes or no.. Moreover, it has been more then 2 month now without any answer, I guess something was wrong… Anyway, I have deleted the product and I'm going to upload it back soon... I hope that now I will get something.. Thanks