Please review my new landing page before i sink alot of money into marketing it.lol

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by legauxenterprises, May 9, 2009.

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    I have made alot of changes to my site. I think its too long as of now but im not sure what to remove and what to keep. I plan on marketing it through several email campaigns. I want my site to be tip top shape before i blast it out there. So please give me a honest review and any tips would be greatly appriatiated.

    here it is:

    www.completetrafficcourse.com


    thanks in advance!
     
    legauxenterprises, May 9, 2009 IP
  2. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The contents impressed me a lot more than the design.The landing page was not much impressive but when we look your contents it was really useful and had shown the importance of SEO.Wiil be fine if you decorate the whole site with professional template and adding some good color schemes to make more attractive to visitors.Thanks for your effort!
     
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  3. sweetcrabhoney18

    sweetcrabhoney18 Banned

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    I like it mostly.. Great price I would however remove the page numbers..
     
    sweetcrabhoney18, May 9, 2009 IP
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    The template looks old, try to change your site into new design template..
     
    2advance, May 10, 2009 IP
  5. DnWebMarketplace

    DnWebMarketplace Banned

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    I am agree with you mate...its look likes oldies website :eek:
     
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  6. kbeus21

    kbeus21 Peon

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    Your right it is a little long, one thing I would recommend is to expand your webpage into a website. Another thing that I find interesting is your saleing a program that teaches SEO and rather than gaining ranks in the search engines your spending money on an email marketing campaign I think it is a little ironic:)
     
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  7. legauxenterprises

    legauxenterprises Active Member

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    thanks everybody for your feedback... can you guys tell me what you think about these subject lines for my email blast: which ones do you guys like and think are not to spammy?

    i want to be your lead provider

    i want to teach you the basics about web traffic through seo

    i want to guide you through the world of web traffic through seo

    i want to teach you how to gain more traffic

    i want to help you get more traffic to your site

    web traffic course review copy

    i want your feedback on my new seo traffic course

    i would like your review for my new course about bringing more traffic to your website

    i would like your review for my seo traffic course

    i would like your feedback about my web traffic course


    thanks alot all!
     
    legauxenterprises, May 11, 2009 IP
  8. umair ahmed

    umair ahmed Banned

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    good work man...
     
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    taha.bluebird Active Member

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    great work. i appreciate it
     
    taha.bluebird, Jun 9, 2009 IP
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    inspire_08 Well-Known Member

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    Good to see your site it looks good...
     
    inspire_08, Jun 13, 2009 IP