Review my new langing page

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  2. windflow

    windflow Peon

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    Is there any word and phrase error?
     
    windflow, May 9, 2009 IP
  3. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The landing page was interesting because of the introduction of the tool but the template is not much fair.You can decorate more by adding a unique template with good color schemes.Thanks for your effort.
     
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  4. windflow

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    Thank you for your reply.But i dont know how to decorate it.
     
    windflow, May 9, 2009 IP
  5. jerrywijaya

    jerrywijaya Banned

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    #5
    One word: cool! :D
     
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  6. patco

    patco Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Looks great- wd
     
    patco, May 9, 2009 IP
  7. justinlorder

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    #7
    Quite professional, the header image looks promising .
     
    justinlorder, May 10, 2009 IP
  8. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    I think the design looks nice and simple..
     
    2advance, May 10, 2009 IP
  9. virtuosoonline

    virtuosoonline Active Member

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    #9
    good concept, however design decoration may be little improved
     
    virtuosoonline, May 10, 2009 IP
  10. hmansfield

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    Ironic that you are selling design tools, yet you don't have it on a good design. You can't sell a BMW by showing a Volkswagon. If you don't know how, you need to learn, or find a template that you can use as a landing page that offers more than just a standard sales page.
    In this instance, your design is important to give the product credibility.
     
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    techmaster456 Banned

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    yea hmansfield has a good point. Make your site look good if your going to sell design tools. Other than that everything else is good.
     
    techmaster456, May 10, 2009 IP
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    Pretty nice but I'd work on the punctuation on those pages, there seems to be missing spaces everywhere, also, might want to make the first questions a bit bigger or better organized as they escape the eye. The picture of the product has to be showing what it's selling, maybe a screencast of a demo?
     
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    javaongsan Well-Known Member

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    #13
    its said Joomla template after the jump. Might cause some confusion
     
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  14. windflow

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    @hmansfield,Thank you very much!
    I will try my best to decorate more.
     
    windflow, May 10, 2009 IP
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    #15
    it looks good .....
     
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    xtreme_ism Banned

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    #16
    nice work.........grow it up...
     
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  17. manman08

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    Good web design landing page
     
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    nice.....good work..
     
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    #19
    keep it up man
     
    taha.bluebird, Jun 7, 2009 IP