$25 Logo Contest For TinyBabyTalk.com (48 Hours)

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  1. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #41
    otakatun: I like the additions. No more changes, let's see what the client thinks.
     
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  2. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #42
    @Alex: Sorry about that (and change made), but still I don't have any records for AG2U.
     
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    Anasone Active Member

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    #43
    here's a revision
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  4. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #44
    CLIENT FEEDBACK

    The client gave me feedback on all the logos that didn't need any more changes. Below is her feedback. Please know that she isn't being rude about your work. Just telling me what she honestly feels.

    @zyndtel: I don't like the baby, but I like the idea of a baby sitting on a book, since I will be selling a book on my site.

    @shinan: Don't like either variation of the logo.

    @-Sr.KoiNdseR: I LOVE the cursive. I also like an idea of a stroller but I don't like this one, it looks too cartoon-ish.

    @technoguy: Of all that I have seen I like this one the most. There is just one BIG problem, I don't care for orange (orange is my least favorite color of all colors). If the artist could make the hair a different color (maybe darker) and change the color of the shirt to something else. Then he could pull other colors into the rest of the logo. I just think taking out the color orange will make the baby softer and more cuddly.

    @TightWad: The babies look like Christmas ornaments. I do like the writing, though. Could they make the slogan cursive?

    @m3l1ssh4: Don't like any of these designs.

    @otakatun: I HATE the baby in both of these designs, but LOVE the writing and conversation cloud. Could the slogan be in cursive?

    @Anasone: Don't like either logo.

    Paul, what I learned from all the logos you showed me is that I like cursive in the text. It doesn't have to be in both the name of my website and the slogan, but I would like to see it in the logo. I also think that there needs to be a balance between cartoon and real life. I think technoguy is the one that has the best balance of this concept. Oh, and also I don't care for orange in designs. Call me weird but I think it is ugly and since this is my site I don't want it =). Please tell all the logo artists that even if I don't choose their design I appreciate all the time they are spending on making me the perfect logo.
     
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  5. otakatun

    otakatun Well-Known Member

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    #45
    Thanks mightybutton and your client. :) Gonna make some changes then err the contest still on rite?
     
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  6. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #46
    @otakatun: Yes, the contest is still going. A winner has not been chosen. Every designer needs to make changes. Those designers who don't make changes will not be considered.
     
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  7. a4hire

    a4hire Active Member

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    #47
    Thanks for the feedback.
    I was going for a more realistic look, but maybe I will try a more cartoon look like the others . I will see if I can come up with a different baby ! :)
     
    a4hire, Mar 27, 2009 IP
  8. -Sr.KoiNdseR

    -Sr.KoiNdseR Peon

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    #48
    here's my new submission
    still loking for the thing you told me in the pm
    also things have been sorted out regarding the baby vector
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    this is freely downloadable and from what I've seen has got any (C) problems
    feedback is always apreciated :)
     
    -Sr.KoiNdseR, Mar 27, 2009 IP
  9. otakatun

    otakatun Well-Known Member

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    #49
    This is my new baby :). The color of 'baby' text been change to green since your client didnt like orange and the slogan text also been change to the cursive.
    Theres two different font I used there, the first is 'Palace Scripts' and the 2nd one is Vivaldi

    [​IMG]
     
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  10. MantisArt

    MantisArt Well-Known Member

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    #50
    Hi, here's my entry, feedback appreciated, thanks

    [​IMG]
     
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  11. technoguy

    technoguy Notable Member

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    #51
    Here are the changes

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    Anything let me know
    any mods can be done
    Feedback Appreciated
     
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  12. vikashking

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    #52
    [​IMG]
     
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    fasterhas Peon

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    #53
    [​IMG]
    Here's the logo I designed. 'By Darkmax' text will be removed if you're getting this logo.
    I Hope you like it.
     
    fasterhas, Mar 28, 2009 IP
  14. LukeKendig

    LukeKendig Well-Known Member

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    #54
    Here is a second try. Took in to consideration what you said and improved in some what.
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    LukeKendig, Mar 28, 2009 IP
  15. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #55
    MY FEEDBACK

    @-Sr.KoiNdseR: The new image really doesn't work. Still a fan of your text, just need to find a better image.

    @otakatun: Still liking the text and the cursive in your second logo is probably best. However, the baby still doesn't work. You do a good job at not making the baby look cartoon-ish, but the baby still doesn't look right. Hope this helps.

    @MantisArt:
    Nice approach with the baby feet. I like the design, I will see what the client thinks.

    @technoguy:
    Thank you for making the changes. I will see what the client thinks.

    @vikashking:
    Thanks for adding a baby to the design, but not quite what we are looking for.

    @fasterhas: This is more a header than a logo, but I like it. I am surprised adding a real baby was thought of sooner. No changes needed, I will see what the client thinks.

    @LukeKendig:
    Thanks for taking my advice to heart on finding a grouding point, but adding the line now distrupts the entire balance of the logo. I do want to say that your text looks a lot stronger, great job here!
     
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    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #56
    CLIENT FEEDBACK

    @MantisArt: The client really likes your logo, she just recommended a few changes. First, the feet need to be hands (since this is a baby sign language course). Also, if you could outline the "Tiny Baby Talk" in red (still keeping the same color scheme, though). Finally, she would like the slogan to be black instead of gray.

    @technoguy: The client really loves the changes you made to your logo. She has no further recommendations. Your logo is now one of the finalists.

    @fasterhas: The client loves your logo, especially how you added a real baby. She has no further recommendations. Your logo is now one of the finalists.

    @otakatun: I noticed you took down your other babies. Could you post a thread showing all your variation of babies? I want to show the client all your babies and get her opinion.
     
    Digital Noise, Mar 28, 2009 IP
  17. otakatun

    otakatun Well-Known Member

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    #57
    Thanks for the feedback mightybutton, here I post again the old version but with a current color and font:
    [​IMG]
     
    otakatun, Mar 28, 2009 IP
  18. Paulng

    Paulng Active Member

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    #58
    haha nice designs guys.

    @mightybutton, I believe you will have a tough choice to make soon =p. May the best designer wins!
     
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  19. zyndtel

    zyndtel Well-Known Member

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    #59
    Here's a different baby. Feedback is still appreciated.
    [​IMG]
     
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  20. Digital Noise

    Digital Noise Well-Known Member

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    #60
    FEEDBACK

    otakatun: Thanks for posting your other babies. Since the client really likes your text but doesn't care for your babies, you might want to try a logo with just baby hands instead of the whole baby. Just a thought.

    zyndtel: I appreciate the change. I also modified your logo to show the client without the black cloud. I thought it would be good for her see both your update with and without a cloud.
     
    Digital Noise, Mar 28, 2009 IP