Please Review My First Lens On Squidoo!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by kush86, Mar 24, 2009.

  1. #1
    Ok, I finally took the time to join squidoo. I went through my old poems I wrote and typed up a lens on squidoo just to see what people think of my writing and what was said.

    Poem Title: The Queen That Birth Me, The Queen I Have

    Did I do a good job?
     
    kush86, Mar 24, 2009 IP
  2. rmeeuwsen

    rmeeuwsen Peon

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  3. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Indeed it is, make one think.

    Having problems with my host lately.
     
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  4. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Lens are really easy to make. Since I have poems laying around that I wrote years back. It's even easier because I don't have to think about something to write. :)

    I made another one that I would be to be reviewed.

    Poem Title: A Real Woman, A Good Woman

    Let me know how I did with this one.
     
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  5. Think_Big

    Think_Big Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Yes, it's a good first lens.

    One tip: change the default headings for the Amazon and Featured Lens modules to something of your own.

    Also, the featured lens you linked to comes up as adult content. It would be better not to have this link on your G rated lens, as it could mean that your lens ends up getting flagged and locked.
     
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    Yes you have done good job...I have seen your profile...it's cool..

    Great Job....
     
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  7. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Thanks for the great tips. I fixed everything you said.

    Thank you. I do my best.
     
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    Think_Big Well-Known Member

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    #8
    The module headings are good now.

    Re-rating the second lens as G is not a good idea though. The content is obviously R and it is likely to get flagged and locked if left as G. If you change it back to R and remove its link from the first lens then both of your lenses will be safe from being locked.
     
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  9. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    You have a point. I did what you said. Now I have to look through a lot of papers to find the rest of my poems I got laying around.
     
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    #10
    looks good..
    but what is the use of lens? do they really make money ?
    And I heard their links are nofollow now.
     
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  11. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    I just joined a few hours ago and made 3 lens. So I didn't make any money yet.
    You can check out this page though: http://www.squidoo.com/workathomewithsquidoo
     
    kush86, Mar 25, 2009 IP
  12. Think_Big

    Think_Big Well-Known Member

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    #12
    This is not true. The links are only nofollow if a lens has less than three modules (not including the introduction and guestbook modules), or if a lens is new. And new lenses become dofollow after there is a Squidoo LensRank update (which usually occurs every 24 hours).
     
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    #13
    Squidoo lens are dofollow.. btw, if you want reviews and suggessions on your lens, you should consider joining the squidoo forum. :)
     
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    #14
    good work....
     
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    #15
    really hardworking
     
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