I need help with my sales letter

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by IMdude2000, Mar 20, 2009.

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    Ok, I have this product on clickbank, I have received 330 hops in 3 days and no sales...

    I was thinking at least a 1% conversion would be ok to start but I have not even met that

    any copywriters take a look and give me your feedback

    thanks

    Here is the sales letter
     
    IMdude2000, Mar 20, 2009 IP
  2. justinlorder

    justinlorder Peon

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    I reviewed your sales letter and didn't find any big problems .
    (Is it due to the traffic is not targeted? )
    However I suggest using catchy/warm color for title .
     
    justinlorder, Mar 21, 2009 IP
  3. IMdude2000

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    what color would you recomend
     
    IMdude2000, Mar 21, 2009 IP