★★ {WTS} Wedding Cakes Site | 100% Unique Content | Part 2 ★★

Wedding Cakes site for sale with 100% Unique Content, clean layout and great domain

Hi,
I am selling a Wedding Cakes Site. This is the second time i sell this site, After the first attempt, when my site still have so many flaws.
http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=1256144
Thanks for all of your suggestion that give me an opportunity to renew this site and make this site better. The site features unique keyword rich pages about "Wedding Cakes". All have been 100% copyscaped passed unique content.

Domain name: AngelWeddingCakes.com
Domain is regged at GoDaddy

The site is new, so assume no revenue or traffic.

Features:

-Clean Design
-Domain with keywords that will definitely help in ranking well in SERPs
-100% Unique Content
-Keyword Rich
-Extremely good niche, High search volume, Low competition.
-CSS Design
-SEO Pages
-9 Copy Scaped Passed Articles, feel free to check with Copyscape.
-Good Placed Adsense Ads
-Lots of error-free content
-Very lots of Amazon and Ebay products that cater to the wedding cakes niche

Starting Bid:$30
Increments of $5
BIN: $90

Payment by paypal

Thank you..

 

nice looking site, but the english is painful to read....

Either these are badly auto-spun articles from another source, or you need to grab hold of a native engish speaker to do some quick editing for you. Shame, because apart from that, this looks to be a very nice site - you have obviously worked hard on it. Best of luck with the sale.

 

Thanks for your review, logondotinfo.. The articles is made by my friends, but i didnt simply put them on.. I recheck and refix all of my articles..

On that part,

<----- It simply mean that "besides all of the essential things like: clothing, food and beverage, venue, and etc; You cannot absolutely accept an alternative for them (them---> all of that essential things). But there is one big-ticket thing that can be hugely reduced (reduced---> accept an alternative for them), that is The Wedding Cakes!!"

I have made that sentences fully with my conscious, not tool.. I hope you catch the mean, if not i cant explain better than this.

Again.. Thanks for your reviews, logondotinfo..

 

should be something along the lines of:

The meaning is the same, but one is English, the other is just about readable but doesnt make literal sense on first pass through. For example, you have capital letters sprinkled like confetti, and it is a wedding cake (no s on the end)....I'm being picky, but this is the kind of thing which for me makes the difference between me placing an offer for a site and not. Either way I anticipate the site would do well in SERPS, but with poor english the visitors wont stay for long, meaning they are less exposed to adverts and revenue streams, meaning less potential for the site owner to earn money from them.

Hope this helps and makes sense, no offence intended.

 

Well the site looks OK but the spelling and the grammar need a complete of rework. That could work in your favour however, as people may click on the ads purely because they are the only things there that make any sense

I think you need to reduce your BIN or have some rework done, my unsolicited advice. good luck with it.

 

Hmmm..
I got it, logondotinfo.. I'm really appreciate that when you waste your time just to tell me where i've made my mistake.. Afterall i must make a site which fit with buyer's apetite.. I have made my site with myself opinion and according to my appetite.. I will not see that if you dont tell me.. Many people here just looking by and not give me a comment or suggestion so i dont know where exactly is my mistake and cant improved well.. So i'm really appreciate that, and i will work hard to acomplished that.. Thank You so much, logondotinfo..

Yes.. i will have some rework surely.. Thanks to you too, mcjp6..

Thanks for all of your suggestion.. Threads closed..

PS:

I laugh when i read that part.. LOLz.. That's maybe quite true..