Please review eBook Landing Page

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    I'm writing a proxy eBook right now, and I would like some comments about the landing page I am building.

    It's not still not complete, the testimonials are examples, and the forms don't work yet. I just want advice on the design and text - this is my first marketing page.

    http://www.ultimateproxyguide.com
     
    Guthix121, Feb 28, 2009 IP
  2. justinlorder

    justinlorder Peon

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    To be honest, it is professional landing page.
    The web2.0 style foot is nice .
     
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  3. dave_rowe

    dave_rowe Active Member

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    #3
    Wow! Nice Landing Page but you should give more information about your product.

    Insert "Limited Time Only!" Text. You also could put

    "The Price For the proxy eBook Is Increasing By $10.00 TONIGHT..."
    "This Is Limited To Only 255, People"

    I Believe you will bring money faster by putting this text into your landing page.

    PS : The monkeyz are the one that bought your product?!? Talking Monkeyz... I will buying one soon. Haha.
     
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    aryan_cool Banned

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    its too good !!!!!!!!! looks very professional
     
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  5. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    I have a list including some of the chapters in the eBook, like
    • Choosing a Proxy Script
    • Finding a Web Host
    • Choosing a Domain Name
    • Monetizing Your Proxy
    • Advertising Your Proxy
    • Managing a Proxy Network
    • And much much more!
    Maybe, but won't people get upset if they visit later and the same text is still there?

    Update: Just added this text in:
     
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  6. BLuka

    BLuka Active Member

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    #6
    it is nice and the template, but try to write more information.
     
    BLuka, Mar 1, 2009 IP
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #7
    The template looks nice but the content looks simple, just add some more graphics on the content. And also a logo is needed for your site.
     
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    sunshines Banned

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    This layout is commonly used across the internet for online scams and get rich fast scams. Therefore i advise you to change your layout
     
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    jesi Active Member

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    It looks like other many Scam sites... I suggest you to change it...
     
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  10. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    What do you mean 'looks like a scam site'? You mean it says 'Buy My eBook?'

    I have added a segment called 'What is a Proxy' so there is more information.
     
    Guthix121, Mar 2, 2009 IP
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    sarah_harvey Active Member

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    To some people sites like these.... the general marketing sites that everyone loves to create is perceived as scam sites. Believe me that is the only reason you do not see normal people buy into these things. Even my husband sees it as scam, which is quite hilarious. But then again, they weren't born into internet marketing or know about it. Even business professionals wouldn't dare dream of buying something through a site that looks like it. Which is what jesi means in his own way.

    Personally I liked your landing page. It's great. ^__^
     
    sarah_harvey, Mar 3, 2009 IP
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    The landing page is not bad but I think it would look better if you got a more unique
    template for the site.
     
    kingofsanda, Mar 4, 2009 IP
  13. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    K Thanks guys :) And honestly I don't have time to make my own template, so I don't think I will for now. Maybe in the future.
     
    Guthix121, Mar 7, 2009 IP
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    Landing page is nice.

    But, better if you can improve it.
     
    Sudhir Goyal, Mar 8, 2009 IP
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    #15
    It looks great but the design looks very common.
     
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  16. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    It is a common template in red, I changed it to blue. I'm not worried about the template too much.

    Can you expand on that?
     
    Guthix121, Mar 12, 2009 IP
  17. Guthix121

    Guthix121 Well-Known Member

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    #17
    After exactly one month of making the landing page, the eBook has been completed :)

    You can now by it, payments via PayPal.
     
    Guthix121, Mar 28, 2009 IP