Please Review My Weight Loss Product landing page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by hmansfield, Mar 7, 2009.

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    I could use some opinions on a new landing page. It purposely doesn't have any SEO, Meta, Descriptions and such, I just need feedback on the design as a landing page.
    I am trying for something less spammy than regular pages in this niche.

    Any opinions are appreciated.
    http://www.tvdietpills.com/alli/
     
    hmansfield, Mar 7, 2009 IP
  2. TheNoose

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    I really like this landing page actually. I posted a thread a while back saying how everyone has the same spammy looking landing pages and that something a little more creative would probably do better. This page definitely looks more professional, and more legitimate than the majority of landing pages out there.

    Good luck with it :)
     
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  3. hmansfield

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    I think I may have participated in that thread ( I remember one like that), I have always felt the same way. I'm normally pretty bad at making them, but I feel pretty good about this one.
    Thanks for the review, it is much appreciated.
     
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    The background color looks nice and I like your stripes design. Nice logo but i think there is lot of content in the home page, try to remove some from it.
     
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    Nice clean colors I like the site
     
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    The layout and design is not bad but I do not like the background.
     
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    You think there is too much content ? Well, I still need to go and add my keywords and phrases to help with the adwords score, but I'll see if I can trim it down a little, or maybe put additional information in pop up windows,

    I can play around with a few things and see if something a little more soothing looks better.

    I was trying to stay away from the traditional loud crap like flames and such that a lot of diet pages have.

    Thanks for the reviews.
     
    hmansfield, Mar 8, 2009 IP