Review my blog about the Web

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by theblurr5495, Mar 6, 2009.

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    Please review my blog at www.webjourney.me
    The blog is new, but please focus on the content. I have 11 posts so far.
    What do you recommend I do to improve the blog content wise and design wise. Thanks to all who comment.:)
     
    theblurr5495, Mar 6, 2009 IP
  2. CSIS

    CSIS Peon

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    Congratulations on your blog. That is awesome at your age. Really cool! You do use big words, even for a 13 year old. Try to write like you talk. Make it very conversational. Would you say plethora in real life? How would you talk to your friends about this stuff?

    Its a .me so are you hosting the site or is it hosted on a free server? I would like to see you improve on the meta title tags on your site. Also you are 13 and the design is kind of plain. Have fun!

    Also there is no clear place to sign up for your rss feed or no opt in box to send emails to your readers.

    Hope this helps

    Bill
     
    CSIS, Mar 6, 2009 IP
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    P.S. You would have a kick butt blog teaching other kids your age how to do this stuff.
     
    CSIS, Mar 6, 2009 IP
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice blogs looks pleasant and also the layout looks good. Try with some other different colors for attraction.
     
    2advance, Mar 6, 2009 IP
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    Good one covered most of the relevant topics. Nice header with logo can make the site more attractive.
    Good luck!
     
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  6. theblurr5495

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    Thanks CSIS, I i'm working on changing the design. For some reason when I download the template and install it it still says its the same template i already have. Never really thought about the language thing. I guess since I will have a voluminous range of people visiting my website, I should use a brevity of advanced words as not to limit understanding.:). What do you mean by meta title tags? I should definitely add a place were visitors can easily sign up for RSS and email. I think your last idea is brilliant. I will make sure to work on something along those lines.
     
    theblurr5495, Mar 7, 2009 IP
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    theblurr5495 Active Member

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    Thanks, your right I should add a unique header with a logo.
     
    theblurr5495, Mar 7, 2009 IP
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    The content is not bad but now you must work on the design.
     
    kingofsanda, Mar 8, 2009 IP