Please Review My New Blog

Discussion in 'Websites' started by vik4a89, Feb 28, 2009.

  1. sandeephegde

    sandeephegde Peon

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    #21
    Good one !

    Cool design...

    See whether you can reduce the number of post on each page as we have scroll down a lot :)
     
    sandeephegde, Mar 6, 2009 IP
  2. vik4a89

    vik4a89 Peon

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    #22
    Done. And i find new theme what use :) I think it is better than that what i have before. Thanks :)
     
    vik4a89, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  3. benjF

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    #23
    A slight improvement. Your copying skills are getting better, but there are still some key mistakes. For example your post, “Bush will write books” is borrowed from http://www.welt.de/english-news/art...te-book-about-his-presidential-decisions.html.

    The original article concludes:

    “Bush’s former secretary of state, Condoleezza Rice, has also agreed to a book deal with Crown Publishing Group. The first book, a memoir of her time in the Bush administration, is tentatively scheduled to appear in the autumn of 2011.

    It would be followed a year later by a book about her upbringing in Birmingham, Alabama, where she was born in 1954. Rice, an African-American, grew up amid segregation and during the civil rights movement in the United States.”

    Yours concludes:

    “Understanding the “Crown Publishing Group” on the book publishing has concluded the former Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice. The first book intended to be issued in 2011. In autumn, and they will have memories of time spent in the Bush administration. The second book will follow on, and it will be for her younger Alabama, where the next secretary of state was born in 1954. year. Rice plant Afroamerikniete segregation and the civil rights movement of the time.”

    You did a good job rearranging some words, but the big problem is that the paragraph and sentences just do not make sense. For example the last one:

    “Rice plant Afroamerikniete segregation and the civil rights movement of the time.”



    On a positive note, I really like the site design...very nice theme.
     
    benjF, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  4. apeedirah

    apeedirah Peon

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    #24
    Theme of the site is really good. It goes with the content. It would be better if you use logos and put banner.
     
    apeedirah, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  5. MattWell333

    MattWell333 Guest

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    #25
    It's quite good. The content is up to date and it's interesting. The design could be a little better but it is good.
     
    MattWell333, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  6. benjF

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    #26
    Welcome to the forum apeedirah and Mattwell333.

    I think you two must be cosmologically connected. Maybe you where born on the same day - under the same constalation. Both of you created your accounts on the same day (today). You accounts where created only an hour apart. Both of you review blogs with quick little comments. And both of you made a comment on this thread.

    Weird. Maybe you two are long lost twin brothers!
     
    benjF, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  7. vik4a89

    vik4a89 Peon

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    #27
    I dont copy article. I live in Latvia. And we have latvian news portal. For example apolo.lv I learn this article in latvian and then translate it. There is difference between your article which you write and my which i post in my blog.
    Thanks.
     
    vik4a89, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  8. benjF

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    #28
    Ok. I will stop bothering you.

    It looks like you have real talent for making a nice looking blog. It looks good. I just think the content could be better.

    Good luck!
     
    benjF, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  9. vik4a89

    vik4a89 Peon

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    #29
    Thanks. I try to write better content but my english skills is not too good :( but i try.
     
    vik4a89, Mar 22, 2009 IP