Critique my motion graphic

Please take a second to watch and critique/rate my Berlington Underground spectogram motion graphic for television advertising; second concept design.
It can be viewed here:
http://vimeo.com/3273436

Also, both this and the old version, along with other pieces in my portfolio can be seen here:
http://www.josh-b.co.cc

And while i'm at it, if you want any motion graphics design work done, feel free to contact me!

Thanks,
Josh

 

aw crap! it wont even let me edit my post now
...Fail

 

I don't get it

 

Not bad but it needs colors to look really kool.

 

Probably because you went to the link i posted instead of the real one, look at the post right after mine!!! that guy know's what he's talking about. i'm just stupid

Thanks, Yeah, in the first concept I had a ton of color, maybe too much even. But this is also a minimalistic design and what the client asked for was what I made.

 

If changed the text color it would really pop.

 

Cool design but calls some other sites up in my mind but cant figure out which site

 

i really like this design, ye you have made it work. the video at the top is a wee bit too big, but appart from that ye, looks good man.

 

Thanks, what do you mean by too big???

 

I think it looks great.

 

Same here. It looks good. No negative thoughts.

 

Hm.. yeah, it's not too bad. I like it, for sure