Review my New Custom Wordpress Theme

Please review my latest work and let me know what improvements can be done so i can enhance my skills.

here is the link Starting Up a Clothing Line

 

Pretty cool idea, did you write the guide/book yourself? I like the colors and the dark theme with bright green- it creates a nice contrast. Have you ever started a clothing line--?

 

not bad, but maybe still a bit too bland for a 'fashionable brand'?, might need some more 'funk'

 

Great idea just not too crazy about the colors I find it too dark

 

^ Dark is good.

Pretty nice design. The only thing you should is design a logo - it'll compliment the site well and will also give your site/product a bit of brand recognition. Oh and also, try changing the font to something a little more readable. At the moment the letters seem too squished together.

 

The ebook is still not done yet but i have a good writer that already working on it.

Yes i need that also. Maybe i need to get some more ideas to make it more funky.

I am really not good on graphic designing especially in logos. But i will try to create one. Yeah i realize that the arial narrow is not that readable. i will change it..

Thanks for the comments guys

 

Just get some one on here to design the logo for a few $

 

A logo would look good on the site. I think that it is monetized well.

 

Good looking site...I love the theme..

 

thanks guys.. i am thinking to make my theme available for wordpress users also. i will give the link here when its available..

 

When i hover over header links i get realy ugly colors like orange and silver, i hate that, make silver more like dark brown, white or black. I miss banner/logo and that font u used just suck, sorry.

 

Not Bad theme

 

Yes thanks for reminding me that. i am about to change that but i just forget.

Yeah i think that font is not really good. It just beautiful in my eyes but not for the other.

 

not bad, congrats

 

I like the big banner but the links at the top of the page don't look very smooth on my monitor

 

I like the dark theme, but IMHO the font color need to be adjusted so it can create more contrast.
Other than that, already a very good site... Best of luck to you !

 

The colors are eye pleasing. I like it. About your site, it aims to sell products, so there should be more persuasive article to push the buyer rather than letting Google ads take your big chance. I meant, remove Google ads and place back what encourage us to buy.

 

Thanks. I insert google ads there for a moment because the ebook is still not done yet but when its finished i will remove it and put some articles to motivate the potential buyers..