[$40] --> Business Card Design Contest (logo provided)

One more revision:

 

A clean one:

 

commb why do you upload the cards so big ?

 

Color changed... and made it vertical too





Feedback appreciated
Thanks

 

Last one by mistake....

 

Some ideas for the first card...




Feedback appreciated.

 

To the vertical one you can apply a gloss coating to the circles and for the normal one you can make the blue circles glossy too. Just an idea.

 

double post sorry

 

Hi, here is my first concept:

 

Is there any way to have the WE BUY and HOUSES span the entire width of the card (or close to it)?

The name and number should be located above the website. Maybe break out the number onto a different line. The number needs to be larger. It needs to be the 2nd main focus on the card.

The wording in the center should be as follows:

No Equity? Behind on Payments?
No Problem!

We'll buy your house
Or take over the payments today!

Absolutely no commissions or fees! (in a different color)​

 

I'm not really feeling this design. Everything seems to blend into one another and there isn't a main focus.
I'm also not really into the background of the front of the card.
The color also makes it seem a little bland.

 

Thanks LsDesign for your submission.
This design is a little too feminine for me and I don't get a good sense of confidence over this design. It feels a little dreamy.

I do like the back of the card though.

I think that there are too many circles and it gets a little distracting. I like your idea about applying the gloss over the circles but I'm not sure how distracting it will be to the other info provided on the card.

 

Wow! I really like this and it is definitely the direction that I wanted for this card. I like the professionalism and the colors are striking.

Is there any way to incorporate the email and website to the front of the card?
A suggestion might be to see what it would look like without the logo on the front of the card. Maybe that might give it more room to put in contact info.

Also, I'm just curious on what the card would look like with rounded corners vs. straight corners. There's lots of sharp corners all through the card and I'm wondering if rounded corners would soften it too much.

Lastly, on the back of the card, can we make "Property Alliances" and "Building Real Equity" in a lighter color so that it stands out more?

Thanks for the great design!

 

My yellow revision:


And let me know your opinion on these:

 

New entry



Feedback appreciated.

 

Sorry, but this is off the mark. Kind of looks like a lava lamp to me

 

Hi again, Thanks for the feedback

I have redesigned the card, doing as you asked.

The only thing I didn't do was put the links on the front of the card; I tried to but wherever I put them, it didn't seem to make the card flow as well, so I kept them on the back, just below the logo. If this is a problem, let me know and I'll try again.




Thanks

Abyss

 

Can you make the "WE BUY" a little larger so that it fills the width a little bit more.
Make the text in the middle slightly larger.
Center the names and phone number
Make the phone number larger as well so that it fills the width of the card.

Is it possible to create this card using the solid blue that you used in the Property Alliances card below? I'd just like to see how it looks.

Do you also have a visual on how the back of this card would look as well?

I'm not sure what I actually think about these cards.
I'm not against them, but they are also not entirely standing out to me either.
I do like the boldness of the Property Alliances wording.

 

I like the back of the card.
I'm not sure about the front of the card so much. I can't pinpoint what it is about the front, but it doesn't stand out to me.