Please review my e-book site / blog

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    sap147, Feb 16, 2009 IP
  2. WritingConsultation

    WritingConsultation Active Member

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    Your blog layout is nice. Content is not too bad. Keep up the work.
     
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  3. ~kev~

    ~kev~ Well-Known Member

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    The buy it now images are off the center column and to the right.

    The meta description and keywords are in place, which is good.

    The colors are pleasing to the eye.
     
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  4. Barakos

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    Real nice color comination.
    I would change the font in the e-book landing page. and the red header could be light blue or something nicer.

    Good luck you're on the right way.
     
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    thanks all for the advice :)
     
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  6. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #6
    The header image of your site is pretty cool. The other content, design and layout are looking old, try some other design.

    I think everything in your blog is quite good.
     
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    oilpullingsecrets.com--Need a professional template for a valuable content posted.

    oilpullingsecrets.com/blog-Has a professional template and layout with a valuable content.Header image is the first one to impress all.Good work.Thanks.
     
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    you've color combination at both sites, but for oilpullingsecrets.com, why your order button not center with the page? Are you've problem with that?
     
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  9. sap147

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    thanks for the compliments.. I am trying to fix the sales copy page but for some reason it is showing up differently on all pc's. If anyone has experience designing/writing sales copy pages please let me know, thanks.
     
    sap147, Feb 17, 2009 IP
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    nice man look good to me
     
    bhavin.again, Feb 20, 2009 IP
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    I like it.
     
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    Hey guys, I completely re-did the main sales page and would appreciate it if you can take a look at it. The images should be centered properly now.
     
    sap147, Feb 22, 2009 IP
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    Like the blog but not the index page. To scammy for me.
     
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    Any recommendations to make it less "scammy"?
     
    sap147, Feb 23, 2009 IP
  15. ~kev~

    ~kev~ Well-Known Member

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    Sure, I have a recommendation.

    Stop putting stuff like this on your site. Are you a medical doctor? Has the reader been to your clinic where you have done blood test and a physical exam to know that the medications are unnecessary?

    From the very first sentence on your site, you have presented yourself as not being a professional, but a snake oil salesman instead.
     
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  16. sap147

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    #16

    thank you, i understand, I will re-write it.
     
    sap147, Feb 23, 2009 IP
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    your blog is really nice..the banner is good too

    you should put the subscribe box on the top !!
     
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    Good, Interesting, Simple. Good Video. :)
     
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    I really like it and added it to my read later list to come back to for myself :)
     
    Ira_150, Feb 23, 2009 IP