Hello, Not to long ago I created a landing page for a few clickbank products, and I want to get as much feed back on it as I can. Good or Bad it doesn't matter Any suggestions will help. Here is my page... http://www.top-biz-reviews.com Thanks, Chris
Looks quite good. Don't really know what to suggest... Maybe a huge relevant header above the introduction? To keep the visitors attached to your site.
I like it as well. I would have to agree with bl4ckmaN^ and say a header to keep interested is a must, but other wise I have to say it is a great landing page.
It looks too fake to me. I don't understand why people constantly use (stock) photos of couples or people in their testimonials section. Why not show real people? Also the BMW doesn't really fit the theme of the page, or do you plan to review BMW products?
i agree with giorgio... on BMW point and those old couples point. People can easily recognise that they have seen same person on another product's review also. Try to hide your affiliate link.
It looks good, but I don't think review pages like that work so well for IM products any more. People are getting more savvy and they can spot an affiliate site a mile off. I do much better with personal blogs - I actually read the product, show screenshots, do case studies, show results, offer bonuses etc. I get a very high conversion rate because people can see that I put some effort into it and that I'm not just trying to sell them the latest rubbish just to get a quick affiliate sale. Of course ultimately my goal is to get the sale, but it works. Think Frank Kern's Mass Control (selling without 'selling'). The recession as well means that people are more wary about spending their money, you've got to be on their level and work to build their trust. You're telling them nothing on your site that they couldn't find on the sales page.
spot on, the first thing I noticed was the bmw, it's a distraction that doesn't really help you sell what your selling on this page, even though its a nice car. And never use stock photos like that.. Just read over the page and ask yourself if you would buy from this site? It seems "phony" to me, and thats what most people see as well and blogging like jm55 mentions is a great way to go about this, much more personal and user friendly, and he also offers some great selling advice. be your customer and sell without selling....sounds easy enough right?
Take out BMW, add a place for people to sign up for your newsletter (AWeber). Get more above the fold - like a call to action. Other than those 2, not bad.
don't like the BMW like most people. When I first see it, I expect the page to be about BMW's. Also don't like the photos of the people. Looks too fake.
I like your landing page. But as most of the members said using realistic photos are much beneficial.
Thanks for the advice. I plan to make some changes to it over the weekend. As for the pictures I just pulled them off the pages of the products I'm promoting, but I could change those around as well. As for the BMW I'll take out that and maybe add in a little thing that says something about signing up to my newsletter.