here the revision of my entry... http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=loginboxccopyps5.jpg and this is the 2nd of my entry... http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=loginboxdcopyzx8.jpg
Well... I was right... The screenshot is not to size, it's MUCH smaller. To get an accurate sized login box you need to increase the size of the screenshot. To designers: You might want to use this screenshot instead, it's a more accurate size. If you use the original screenshot, your login box will appear larger than it would actually be. By the way, did you pay to have this design made? If you did... then you got ripped off: http://www.cnn.com/
I must say, as far as placement of the text field and following instructions wise, this one is the BEST. The only thing you will need work on is making it look better. This is the exact slim-ness I was looking for, only thing it's not very web 2.0 looking. So improve on the graphics of the login box for this one will win you the contest.
This is still the best so far, as far as slimness of the design and location. The only thing I don't like about this login box is the graphics of the login box. It just looks very unprofessional and unpolished.