I need help - reviewing my LP

Discussion in 'Google AdWords' started by The Fly, Feb 7, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi Guys,
    I need your help reviewing my LP. I wrote my LP like a personal recommendation, and I think I did a pretty good job.

    I selected about 1400 KW, which I devided into 400+ adgroups (manually). I started the campaign and everything went well QS was between 8-10 and lots of impressions to the low bid of $0.05.

    I then raised the bid to $0.5 while the QS was starting to decrease, I added more appropriate ads to the different adgroups, but as of yesterday google has slapped me and all my QS is now 3 and from 6000 impressions a day im down to 150.

    So here is my LP http://www.become-a-citizen.com/ and I would really appreciate it if you could tell me what have I done wrong?!

    Thx
    The Fly
     
    The Fly, Feb 7, 2009 IP
  2. milan1west

    milan1west Peon

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    #2
    Quick answer:
    Cut your campaign down to the top 3 or 4 adgroups, with no more than 7 words in each adgroup, sending you the most traffic with the best QS. Also if you haven't already, start tracking your sales to find out which keywords are converting for you.

    Normally, Google doesn't actually send a "live" person to look at your site until 3 or 4 days have passed; there's simply too many advertisers using Adwords for even Google to check out everything when it's first submitted. As soon as the Adwords person saw your 400 adgroups, he probably slapped a "spam" tag on your campaign automatically. So long good quality score...

    That's Google for you.

    PS: By the way, I thought your site was pretty good.
     
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  3. vesparich

    vesparich Peon

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    #3
    Just a quick comment on your headline. I think it was Dan Kennedy who said to ask "Who cares?" after each headline or bullet. Who cares how your nana got citizenship? Gear the headline so that someone would care. Something like, "I'll show you how to get citizenship and avoid any hassles, just like my nana did." See the difference? It's not the best rework but it should help you out. :)
     
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  4. The Fly

    The Fly Peon

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    Thanks guys for the remarks.

    Ill keep you posted on how things turn out.

    The Fly
     
    The Fly, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  5. hotbacon

    hotbacon Well-Known Member

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    #5
    start a new campaign with 10-20 high trafic keywords. All other keywords should be paused until you'll build a decent CTR, let's say 2% for 3-4 days. After that unpause your keywords by small batches and keep your CTR
     
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  6. Brooke.Coin

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    #6
    Do you know that by clicking on on you link i get: Address Not Found...

    Brooke
     
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  7. The Fly

    The Fly Peon

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    #7
    i dono if to cry or laugh

    maybe that is why no conversions

    thx a million
    The Fly
     
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  8. gingishanibal

    gingishanibal Peon

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    #8
    Traffic is all about that is my opinion !
    You can have a very, very good site, blog, lens or sales letter but with no traffic you have ZERO RESULTS and you will work in vain !
    You can try The adwords manifesto, is the latest ebook that includes last tricks about using adwords !
    I make a review at
    hubpages.com/hub/Adwords-Manifesto-Review
     
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  9. pipes

    pipes Prominent Member

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    #9
    How long without no conversions?
     
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  10. The Fly

    The Fly Peon

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    #10
    ok so here is whats going on...

    I took the best 20-30 keywords into 7 adgroups.

    Since google slapped my campaign and domain i bought a new domain and optimized the LP even more added some articles i wrote.

    campaign went up QS mostly 8 some 7...had one conversion...but now QS is mostly 7 and some 3 5 and 6. of course now they want higher bids.

    what do i do now?

    thx
    The Fly
     
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  11. The Fly

    The Fly Peon

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    anyone? please
     
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  12. hotbacon

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    #12
    What is your CTR? Use exact match only to increase CTR, add negative keywords
     
    hotbacon, Feb 21, 2009 IP