Review my giveaway squeeze page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by nathan D, Jan 31, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi all,

    I was wondering if a few of you could visit my squeeze page and let me know what you think? Ive just re-arranged the format and have my opt-in box "above the fold".

    http://www.theultimateprofitsite.com

    Any comments good or bad would be appreciated.

    Thanks,

    Nathan
     
    nathan D, Jan 31, 2009 IP
  2. nathan D

    nathan D Peon

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    just updated the heading on the squeeze page
     
    nathan D, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    I think it's pretty good! It's not obnoxiously long like a lot of squeeze pages. My only question, why don't you also add another form at the bottom of the page? Instinctively, I wanted to have it there waiting for me.
    Have you tested this page yet? See what happens if you add another form.
     
    Adsmarket, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Hi der i would just lik to add a comment on your web site that if you can just put some information on the introductory page then it would really help the users to grab some knowledge on your site and then if some one is interested they can log in into the site and even it would look more professional. You must be also having some plannings for it but i think it would look more attractive and professional if we go with it. All the best for your future.
     
    concept.ashish, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Hey, your squeeze page was so good that I gave you my information for the free ebook! Also, if I had the $27 for your video offer, I would have given you that, too! I am a spelling and grammar nut, but I didn't find one mistake.

    Overall, your offer not only looks good, but it is very convincing. Bravo!
     
    msdebra, Feb 2, 2009 IP
  6. nathan D

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    Thanks for your comments! I will definatley place an opt-in box at the bottom of the page to test. The page has 'grown' since I originally put it up so therefore it would make more sense to put an opt-in at the end.
     
    nathan D, Feb 5, 2009 IP
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    Appreciate your comments. Im glad my spelling impressed you :) Im also more glad you signed up - thanks!
     
    nathan D, Feb 5, 2009 IP