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Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Fellowspot, Feb 2, 2009.

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    Fellowspot, Feb 2, 2009 IP
  2. river

    river Active Member

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    I would go through your posts and check the grammar again. I noticed a few errors.

    Good Luck
     
    river, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Hi it is really lovely like through this we can send flowers across the world. Great idea. I really loved the idea. Specially your background colour its lovely. Truly contrasting with the flowers. All the best for your web site.
     
    concept.ashish, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Over all I think its very nice. I like the color combo. Note your Goggle Ads is breaking your black border on the right side in IE. It would be nice to see more images within the articles showing examples. Also, your header's font is Arial... and I know you're keeping it text for search engine sake, but you really could stand to use a better font. Perhaps you can keep a subtitle in arial (text) and use a nicer font for the header as an image.
     
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    Soho Web Well-Known Member

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    Lovely site. you might want to consider taking out the Google ads column and put them underneath each article. As "XIRA" said "It would be nice to see more images within the articles showing examples" Good Luck
     
    Soho Web, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Looks good. However, try not to overuse the "wedding" word. It seems that it appears quite a number of times throughout the article especially your sidebar link.
     
    lycos, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    nice site i really like your theme its seems beautiful and simple theme And content Is also very interesting but As River Said you have lot of grammar mistakes so check them again and make them clear
     
    mmind786, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Looks OK. Why don't you try entrecard or spott to improve traffic ?
     
    mrdo, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    blended your color ads, this is make your blog cool :)
     
    nabilacute, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Not bad - as others have said, there are lots of gramatical errors/typos - e.g.<The flowers can also be passed on to good cuisine and relatives for their weddings> eh??

    The main adsense tower banner is too wide, so looks a bit ugly

    The menu is far too long for easy navigation... but possibly OK for SEO!
     
    Red Paul, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    aditne Banned

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    Good theam and design. Just proof-reading is required.
     
    aditne, Feb 2, 2009 IP
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    Overall, your site looks very nice. The only thing I would change is the flower border. Since your are talking about wedding flowers, I would have a picture of a "wow" bouquet rather than flowers grown in a garden. Just make sure everything is spelled correctly and gramatically correct and you have a near-perfect website.
     
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    Alright design, its beyond me why you would have adsense when you a targeting traffic looking for wedding flowers. Gives a very unprofessional feel, maybe feels a bit cheap? easily fixed by removal of ads. Just a suggestion
     
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    It is a nice three column design .
    But the first two columns spread to the header section . It is not good that way .
     
    justinlorder, Feb 3, 2009 IP
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    Sorry?

    Actually i didn't write these articles i just hire some one to write them for me and i didn't check all these articles too i just post them on my site Anyways i will check them latter and try to improve them as soon as possible ... and yeah, thank you so much guys for your cool and kind review i will try to improve my site
     
    Fellowspot, Feb 4, 2009 IP
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    Good looking site and i like the design.When i opened in firefox,IE 7 and opera,the google adsense box breaks your black border on the right side which is not fair.Will be great if you resolve it.Thank you.
     
    netdriver788, Feb 5, 2009 IP