Please review my website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by umbulnarmadi, Jan 25, 2009.

  1. #1
    Dear all,

    I am newbie here, would you like to review my web blog ? http://www.narmadi.com this blog is about type approval indonesia

    Thanks and regards,
    Narmadi
     
    umbulnarmadi, Jan 25, 2009 IP
  2. workathomeshop

    workathomeshop Notable Member

    Messages:
    1,384
    Likes Received:
    33
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    215
    #2
    Very nice website, but perhaps more flashy header logo is needed to add some colour ?
    Best of luck with it
    Cheers
    Samantha
     
    workathomeshop, Jan 25, 2009 IP
  3. umbulnarmadi

    umbulnarmadi Peon

    Messages:
    8
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #3
    Thanks for your response, yes this type approval blog in my plan to redesign..and view days ago i already got the hosting partners...

    Thanks
     
    umbulnarmadi, Jan 26, 2009 IP
  4. river

    river Active Member

    Messages:
    1,632
    Likes Received:
    54
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    88
    #4
    Two things:

    Your tagline "Type Approval - Compliance - Certification Partnership" streches into the text area to the right of the title.

    I would have someone proofread the content for grammar mistakes.

    Good Luck
     
    river, Jan 26, 2009 IP
  5. blackpaw

    blackpaw Peon

    Messages:
    125
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #5
    Good start, to me there is a lot of 'red' highlights maybe a more softer color like blue would be better, like river says have someone proof read for errors. For a small example sometimes the upper case "I" and then the lower case "i" maybe instead using 'I' at all try using "we", to me it sounds more professional and makes it appear as thou you have a team doing the jobs.

    Some of the post are difficult to read break them up into shorter paragraphs.

    Just a DP Grunts not even 2 cents worth
    blackpaw
     
    blackpaw, Jan 26, 2009 IP
  6. proberto

    proberto Peon

    Messages:
    45
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #6
    Looking nice. Maybe considering add more "colour" to the website.
     
    proberto, Jan 26, 2009 IP
  7. tigerwolf

    tigerwolf Peon

    Messages:
    25
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #7
    Hi

    As a layman, I'd say the site is good - and to say its a new site, you've already got good Alexa and Technorati Ranking, so you must be doing soemthing right [which I guess is the inbound links]. Just a minor point, the Google Adsense might be better as a banner rather than a block, because its rolling over into the post headers in a few places. That irritates me, but maybe that's just a personal thing.
    Other than that, like so many other sites out there, I guess its just a case of tweeking testing and improving.
    Good luck
     
    tigerwolf, Jan 26, 2009 IP
  8. s.miller

    s.miller Peon

    Messages:
    127
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #8
    a normal plain blog...its so suitable for people that are looking for additional info...
     
    s.miller, Jan 26, 2009 IP
  9. umbulnarmadi

    umbulnarmadi Peon

    Messages:
    8
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #9
    Hi tigerwolf,

    Your opinion is great..thanks. and i do agree all of your opinion above. I'm going to redesign =header, adsense asap
     
    umbulnarmadi, Jan 26, 2009 IP
  10. umbulnarmadi

    umbulnarmadi Peon

    Messages:
    8
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #10
    Deal all DP members,

    I need your comment on my type approval blog as i said before

    Thanks and regards,
    Narmadi
     
    umbulnarmadi, Jan 31, 2009 IP
  11. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

    Messages:
    2,614
    Likes Received:
    72
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    140
    #11
    The layout, design are excellent and need to add some more colors at background. Its looking very simple.
     
    2advance, Jan 31, 2009 IP
  12. phpmysqlpro

    phpmysqlpro Peon

    Messages:
    30
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #12
    simple and gud design... perhaps u can add some vibrancy to the look and feel
     
    phpmysqlpro, Feb 1, 2009 IP
  13. derajmann

    derajmann Banned

    Messages:
    38
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #13
    nice design
     
    derajmann, Feb 1, 2009 IP
  14. EagleAye

    EagleAye Peon

    Messages:
    10
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #14
    Overall, I would say your site looks good. It's clean, it's easy to read and it's simple to navigate. The only thing I would change is the color of the links and some of the text. Typically, clickable links are blue; most of yours are maroon. I kept expecting a link when I saw the blue text, but none of the blue text was a link. You may want to think or reversing your colors. Make your blue highlighted taxt maroon and your clickable links blue. Just my opinion.
     
    EagleAye, Feb 1, 2009 IP
  15. klm.php

    klm.php Banned

    Messages:
    62
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #15
    You did a great job with the CSS. The design is very simplistic and easy to find where I want to go. The only thing I can see wrong with it is that the background is a bit too white, just my opinion though. :)
     
    klm.php, Feb 1, 2009 IP
  16. umbulnarmadi

    umbulnarmadi Peon

    Messages:
    8
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #16
    I just wanna say Thanks to all of you guys... I love you all
    I love your comments,I love the DP forum from here i wanna get something different to build my type approval blog

    Regards,
    Narmadi
     
    umbulnarmadi, Feb 1, 2009 IP