What do you think of this design for product I am selling?

I have 2 versions of a page for selling PHP script and was wondering which of the 2 is better.

http://www.instantadsensemachine.com

OR

http://instantadsensemachine.com/special.htm

 

I like http://www.instantadsensemachine.com better. They both seem to be a little like spam though. Try just talking about the product rather than just going in to a sales pitch.

 

Thanks, could you give me some pointers about making it less sales pitch? Do I already have enough info there or are you saying I should take out some stuff?

 

I think http://instantadsensemachine.com/ is better. Could you lower your price

 

well the first sample is best for me! but the price is kind of high!!!

 

I go for the first one though!

 

Thanks. I just did another update using the first version. I think it looks pretty good. And prasetyo43, I lowered the price. I'll send you a link to a special promo.

 

I like the first of the two best.

 

the first one looks best. besides looking more professional it doesnt look like your selling some ebook (second design)

 

definetly the first one the second one looks like a salespage from 4 years ago to basic

 

Hehe.. is it really that bad the second one? I thought that's what many people use for selling their products.

 

they do but only because they are not able to get better ones

 

I think they both look pretty neat actually, but the first one is better-looking. If you're going to run an ad campaign I suggest using both and see which one gets the most sales, you can never tell sometimes.

 

Not so interesting, Sorry

 

The first one seams more professional so less likely to come across as a scam. Plus it looks so sweat. second has no eye candy. kind of boring. like something i'd do (-;