My First Site Please review

for you first website i think it is better than most.

also is that a counter down the bottom? if so may i suggest you remove it

 

you need to pre-sell the products you are promoting, otherwise your customer has no need to buy anything from you. throwing up a bunch of hoplinks and hoping your customers will click on them is like waiting to win the lottery.

also the site needs some direction. I didnt really know what to click on or what the purpose of the site really was. if customers don't know where to go, they usually leave.

 

Ok see what you think now. Thanks for the input.

 

Ok I have updated my site now. I have taken stuff off and added others.

Thanks in advance for all the advice.

 

You could use some reviews before all of the CLICK HERE! stuff on your secondary pages. When I see "MAKE MONEY WITH FOREX!! CLICK HERE" I will hit BACK 100% of the time. If there is some kind of review I'll stick around. If it's a down to earth, no nonsense review with a little story of how Bob the plunger salesman sold off his plungers, bought the program, and now sells birdhouses one day a week while his automated forex site does the rest, I'd stay even longer and probably click.

Make the sales pages interesting.

 

i guess the counter is now gone, which is one thing i would have probably noticed too, but i think its very professional looking, and wouldnt have pegged it as your first site, way to go!

 

Great point, I will look for a feel good story on each of the products.

Thanks

 

Thanks, Yeah the counter was the first thing I took off because of its popularity (lol j/k)