IS this a good business card

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by Killertu, Jan 18, 2009.

  1. #1
    I"m just making a simple bussiness card so I could pass along to my friend without writing everytime, so the card doen't need phone,email or stuff like that seen they know what they gonna get.so what u think of the card.

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    also I'm gonna use vistaprint today seen it on sale XC so what u think.

    PS:I'm not adding any image due to copyright which I don't want to mess up with XD

    PSS:I'm putting some survey in there just for fun.......

    This is what I got before but...you know...copyright....

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    Killertu, Jan 18, 2009 IP
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  2. justingh

    justingh Peon

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    I like the design and all, but for me there is just way to much going on - You should think about having a focal point in the middle and less around the outside.
     
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  3. Killertu

    Killertu Member

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    Well, what do you think I should put the"around the outside"??
     
    Killertu, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  4. Mthrough

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    I want this on my business card
     
    Mthrough, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  5. Niche_Machine

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    #5
    Depending on your demographics I would say you should do a complete re-design.

    Killertu; Look at other business cards. And please don't add anything on the outside as it will make it too busy..
     
    Niche_Machine, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  6. dollarlife

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    it looks excellent. the color will attract more people
     
    dollarlife, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  7. Killertu

    Killertu Member

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    WHat u think of the random question????I try do be different card
     
    Killertu, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  8. jduf

    jduf Peon

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    #8
    If this is a business card then you are selling something. If so you must get people to trust you.
    Originality is not always the best way to build trust. It's not the safer way. But in some niches it pays.
    Do some testing.
     
    jduf, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  9. Jimthewriter

    Jimthewriter Guest

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    I don't want to sound harsh, but that business card is not very good...

    It is hard on the eyes, you can't really understand anything on it and it looks childish...

    Maybe you should have a look at some pre-made business card templates, or do a google image search for business cards...

    Good Luck
     
    Jimthewriter, Jan 18, 2009 IP
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    I like it. It is outstanding and easily stick to a memory.
     
    jerry12, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  11. Ibn Juferi

    Ibn Juferi Prominent Member

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    I really tried to see any redeeming feature in it but I just don't like the colours, fonts and layout, sorry. The purpose of a biz card is to provide the user with your name and contact info, I don't see the point of you giving out biz cards if you don't have even those basic details.
     
    Ibn Juferi, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  12. Tulumbo

    Tulumbo Active Member

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    I honestly believe that is one of the most terrible business cards I have ever seen. It makes me dizzy.
     
    Tulumbo, Jan 18, 2009 IP
  13. Killertu

    Killertu Member

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    ..........This is just a card pass to my friends.....didn't I told you,they just mostly need the domain name, also,I'm not selling anything, it jsut a community website
     
    Killertu, Jan 19, 2009 IP
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    dmi Well-Known Member

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    I don't like it, sorry. It's way to "colorful".
     
    dmi, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  15. Killertu

    Killertu Member

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    I know,that what I jsut thinking, com'on ,any idea, I got to buy it on today, it on sale
     
    Killertu, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  16. ProWebTalk

    ProWebTalk Banned

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    No offense bro, but you shouldn't even consider that for a business card. That is the most unprofessional thing i've ever seen.
     
    ProWebTalk, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  17. Killertu

    Killertu Member

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    ......I told you, I know
     
    Killertu, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  18. esem

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    #18
    Alot of web effects dont translate well on to business cards unless its really well done, The reflection on the "floor" is something that wont translate well.

    Its hard to make a childish business card look good, Props for trying.

    Them bevels on the font, also wont translate well.
     
    esem, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  19. pips99

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    #19
    nothing special, i would hire a designer to make a professional business card!
     
    pips99, Jan 19, 2009 IP
  20. add_cents

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    #20
    I prefer business cards that are more simple.
     
    add_cents, Jan 19, 2009 IP