Please review my 2blog

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  2. river

    river Active Member

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    I think the designs fine. I would just correct they grammar and spelling on both sites.
     
    river, Jan 10, 2009 IP
  3. ceweqsakti

    ceweqsakti Banned

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    #3
    Both of them,i use Cheap writer .LOL
    because i need fast Content
    but i will correct it
     
    ceweqsakti, Jan 10, 2009 IP
  4. error666

    error666 Greenhorn

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    http://www.davis-rudell.com/ looks a bit boring, but http://columbiachorale.org/ looks very nice! Go on & Good luck!
     
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    xstatic Peon

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    #5
    Very nice layout - good work!
     
    xstatic, Jan 10, 2009 IP
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    TeresaWrites4U Member

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    #6
    I definitely agree that you need to clean up the writing on your site. I see that you commented you use a cheap writer because you need a fast writer. A super fast writer does you no good if the content is so poor that no one will read it.

    You can certainly get a good writer who is fast, but he/she may not be as cheap as you would like. Sometimes you need to choose which matters more: saving a couple of bucks or getting content that will keep bringing readers back to your blog.

    Tough to review the site, otherwise, but I will sure stop back in a few days to see if you found a new writer. :)
     
    TeresaWrites4U, Jan 10, 2009 IP
  7. ceweqsakti

    ceweqsakti Banned

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    Thx for your suggestion
    Iam also writer service
    i have team for this
    But,i will use that 2 blog for experiment with seo
     
    ceweqsakti, Jan 11, 2009 IP
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    m_maker Peon

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    #8
    the sites are good design....but with the wrong words/ grammar...it would be a disaster buddy...please fix it fast.
     
    m_maker, Jan 11, 2009 IP
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    On davis-rudell.com the header is too large I think it would look better if you made it
    smaller. On columbiachorale.org I think you should add more colors into the color
    scheme the page is a bit too dark.
     
    kingofsanda, Jan 11, 2009 IP
  10. BestOP

    BestOP Peon

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    #10
    your blog is good.
    keep working
     
    BestOP, Jan 12, 2009 IP