Please review my new site

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    alimosavi, Jan 7, 2009 IP
  2. ultimatecoder

    ultimatecoder Peon

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    #2
    nice dude veruy nice
     
    ultimatecoder, Jan 7, 2009 IP
  3. William 

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    Hello,

    I do believe your website is off to a wonderful start.

    However, may I suggest you add a bit more onto your banner at the top on your main page to possibly make it appear a bit more appealing to your members and visitors ?

    Other than that, everything is looking great.

    Best of luck

    Regards,

    William
     
    William , Jan 7, 2009 IP
  4. alimosavi

    alimosavi Banned

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    #4
    thanks a lot

    I now start solving it's problem ( banner , font , tag , menu bare and a small problem in IE )
     
    alimosavi, Jan 8, 2009 IP
  5. William 

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    Alright, Alimosavi.

    Best of luck with that, and always be sure to check back in if you need an update on how it's looking.

    Regards,

    William
     
    William , Jan 8, 2009 IP
  6. river

    river Active Member

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    #6
    There are 3 things you could do:

    The blue and red colors of the header should stretch all the way across the top, they stop halfway though the search box. The header could also be shorter, there's alot of empty space.

    The 3 stories in the top box could some titles.

    I would capitalize all the word in you site name.

    Good Luck
     
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  7. alimosavi

    alimosavi Banned

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    #7
    thank you for your suggestions .
    it is good suggestions .
     
    alimosavi, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    #8
    good and nice site i think that you should put at the top some link and do some sections for clean the home page. But the colors and the organization like me.
     
    fullparty, Jan 8, 2009 IP
  9. steelfrog

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    #9
    There's a few things wrong with your interface.

    • Some of the text is clearly written in broken English. While that won't necessarily turn away some of the users, it will annoy people like me who are bothered/annoyed by it.
    • Most of the paragraphs are being forced to line break in weird places. This is prominent in the top three articles and many of the longer paragraphs below.
    • Your thumbnails could use a 1px black border for cleanliness. This can very easily be achieved with a little CSS.
    • The header breaks at my resolution: 1680x1050. Here's a screenshot.
    • In your poll, you say World War 3 happened in ST. What's ST? Not a good idea to use non-common acronyms.

    In resume, there's nothing majorly off. All you need to do now is tweak it a bit. I like the colors and the fonts you've selected. Good luck!
     
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    #10
    The design isn't bad but the header could be more appealing you should get a more
    professional logo and add some graphics into the header, and the background colors
    of your header should occupy 100% of the width of the page so there is no empty
    space at the top of the page.
     
    kingofsanda, Jan 8, 2009 IP
  11. alimosavi

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    #11
    content of this site is a sample example ( it is a cms and creating new content and editing exist content is very easy )
    also poll ( it is only a example ). state of this site is dev and I no put it in my root address . it need more development.

    I need your review for complete the site and solve it's problem.

    thank a lot for your assistance .

    for screenshot : I must change header image because it none repeatable or I must select a base background color and set this image in center align . what is your opinion for this action ?
     
    alimosavi, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    sakto Active Member

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    #12
    Yeah the header position does not look good perhaps can be corrected with coding.
     
    sakto, Jan 8, 2009 IP
  13. flipmytext

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    #13
    Fix the header as everyone had already mentioned.
    Be sure to add a 'bookmark' tool to your site, such as AddThis or ShareThis.
     
    flipmytext, Jan 8, 2009 IP
  14. alimosavi

    alimosavi Banned

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    #14
    thank

    I added "bookmark site and pages" and "share this" and "Email this page" options to news content.
     
    alimosavi, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    #15
    I change logo.
    what is your opinion about new logo?
     
    alimosavi, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    #16
    Besides the top section it looks very nice..
    Bad logo
    White drop down menus
    Wrong aspect ratio world map..( you dont need to show all word maybe)

    Your top section colors doesnt match your rest of the website..
     
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  17. alimosavi

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    #17
    tanks all

    now ?
     
    alimosavi, Jan 8, 2009 IP
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    #18
    hey,

    need some more work in menu bar...

    need some changes in fonts...

    You may include some more content in Title bar.......

    Anyways,

    Keep it up.......
     
    kiefer, Jan 9, 2009 IP
  19. alimosavi

    alimosavi Banned

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    #19
    Hi
    I update design and structure of site

    Please Review now : http://vatgar.com/

    thanks
     
    alimosavi, Jan 12, 2009 IP
  20. WebHostingBucket

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    #20
    Site is complete, you also need a better logo
     
    WebHostingBucket, Jan 12, 2009 IP