Critique This Logo Please

Hey, i wanted your opinions on this logo i made. I was supposed to make the initials T J D. This is a quick logo i whipped up. Looking for your opinions of this.

 

Looks alright, but i can't see what TJD means. Maybe, slogan?

 

no those are just intials . right now i just wanted to know how the logo part looked and if it was legible.

 

Its very legible I don't know that the dot on top of the "J" is needed,
Try it without

 

I like it . Its sisimple but effective

 

I agree, you could connect the dot of the 'j' with the 'D'

My question is it looks all well and good here with colour added fo emphasis - how does it hold up in one colour?

Doing logos in 1 colour is the ultimate test of legibility. Also try shrinking it down to .5in so see how it holds up.

Yours should do fine with both, but keep those two tests in mind when you make more logos.

 

TJD? Looks ok but can be improved.. Perhaps need to put some slogan or motto on it. For my first impression, I dont have a clue what it's all about.. All the best..

 

By the way, I also do logo design part-time, if you need my service, you can PM me...

 

Solid J would make it a little better, but for initials, it's pretty good.

 

I tried that out. Here it is. I Think it looks better this way. Any comments?



EDIT
heres the final logo. with the name slogan and all . whcih version of the two is better. THe colours will be changed later but which do you think is better?

 

Hey guys, no comments yet, please advise me which one should i go with.

 

Top one. There you are consistent with the J and D

 

I like the new 'TJD' without the extra 'Design' part. Very slick.

 

Really like the new logo, stick with it!

 

when youll refer to the "new" logo, which one do you'll mean??
From the two in this pic, the top or bottom ??



Or were youll talking about these two
OLD:


NEW:

 

You know what, I change my mind. I prefer the first one. It just feels cleaner, complete.

 

the one with the dot on j?

 

the N° 1 you can add the slogan in the " T "

 

first one is good.

 

I actually prefer the one with the dot on the j. Makes more sense to me, otherwise looks like a D with a tail. Or maybe change the dot's colour to the J and then join it up to the D so it's side-by-side.