$50 Logo design for my site

I can't see the text :-(

 

First try:


Second try:




Comment appreciated, Thanks!

 

Updated with regular font :

 

I like the yellow one but it's too plane. And I'm not sure about the placement of "The"

 

Feedback appreciated.

 

Here is my entry..


Edit:
Another color concept added

 

fixed the text

v1.


v2.

 

well u didnt comment on my previous entries, so im hoping you were waiting for the color and not just hating it.
Colors/fonts/reflections etc can be changed.

 

Colors font can be changed etc

 

My try:

 

i will subnit in a while.................

 

Here's mine... just added an accent on the logo-text.
Feedback appreciated.





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I like the 2nd one better.

 

Not a fan of the shade because it's had to see it

 

The yellow color is not the shade that I like. Should be darker. Also, it looks boxy. Maybe u should use a different font.

 

Not sure if you read my original post but I said, no logo-- just pure text.

 

It's too thin

 

Thanks for the feedback..

Here's my revision...

 

By the way, I change my mind. No mirror effect on the logo. I want it utilize it on prints, that's why.

 

If you guys want to know the kind of logos that I want, you might want to see this:

http://www.davidairey.com/portfolio/