New Product 90% Commission Need Openion

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by joycb, Jan 1, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I am a affiliate in CB. Today am going to submit a new product in CB. way2destination (dot) com this is the product.


    I am going to give 90% Commission for my first 100 affiliate who will made 50 sales first.


    Default payout $75 commission.

    You need to complete 50 sales to get extra 15% within 60 Days. We are ready to help you in your every effort.


    Please give me your thought about it.
     
    joycb, Jan 1, 2009 IP
  2. Ripped

    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    You really need to put more work on it, especially the sales text, the grammar is awful, find someone who speaks good English to revise your text and fix the numerous grammar errors, furthermore it's very incoherent and I cannot tell what exactly you're trying to say at many instances.

    Also, why are you e-mailing the customers with the ebook after they make a purchase, why are you doing it manually, why don't you just put the ebook on the thank you page so that they can instant access rather than wait for you to send them your book?

    Just some friendly tips
     
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  3. terryd

    terryd Well-Known Member

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    Yeah wow.....you were so polite with your review Ripped. :D

    That needs a ton of work done on it. You need to get someone who can read/write English properly.

    I only got 1/4 way down the page before leaving, no serious affiliates would ever promote this the way that it is now.

    Go back to the drawing board and then come back here and ask for more reviews.
     
    terryd, Jan 1, 2009 IP
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    Artifexus Active Member

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    I could barely get past the header. Get some good landing page copy and a design. Otherwise, you're wasting your time.
     
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    Are you your own testimonial?
     
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  6. joycb

    joycb Peon

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    #6

    Thank You. I will fix the grammar problem.


    actually if i put the download link in the thank you page. its may be abuse.

    send me some code or idea to make it dynamick way.

    thank you for the great help
     
    joycb, Jan 1, 2009 IP
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    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    You won't need to majorly protect your product, simply put the following code on the thankyou page
    <META NAME="ROBOTS" CONTENT="NOINDEX, NOFOLLOW">

    It will prevent google from indexing your thank you page.
     
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    joycb Peon

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    Thank You for the nice help. But some one can share my download link easily
     
    joycb, Jan 1, 2009 IP
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    terryd Well-Known Member

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    Then prepare to spend some money and purchase something like DownloadGuard
     
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    joycb Peon

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    Thank you for the help. is the design okey?
     
    joycb, Jan 1, 2009 IP
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    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    It's decent, you can improve it tho. The sales text is more important than the design for this kinds of products IMO, so focus your energy on that.
     
    Ripped, Jan 1, 2009 IP
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    wowhaxor Banned

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    If you want try the contests section of this forum, for $100 prize you can get a few really well designed websites to choose from. The guys in there do really good work.
     
    wowhaxor, Jan 2, 2009 IP