Please review my new site!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by want2achieve, Dec 15, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi all,

    I did like you all to review and rate my new web site. Changes also appreciated!

    Site: http://www.cityfold.com

    Thanks in Advance!
     
    want2achieve, Dec 15, 2008 IP
  2. Jackie_W

    Jackie_W Well-Known Member

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    sorry but it looks very generic to me, concept is good but needs jazzing up a bit with some logos etc?

    also if i choose jackie_w as username and click "verify" it says ok but when i try to register is says illegal chars in name :-(
     
    Jackie_W, Dec 15, 2008 IP
  3. vasishta

    vasishta Peon

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    yes.. ur site is nice.. just it needs a nice theme and some logos!
     
    vasishta, Dec 15, 2008 IP
  4. want2achieve

    want2achieve Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Your submitted story published!
     
    want2achieve, Dec 15, 2008 IP
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #5
    I tried in opening your site but it was giving some php error message for half of the page.So i tried in reopening in my seond browser but the same error.After refreshing , i could see your whole design.Anyway i like the design and layout.Fantastic color combination and button styles.Overall simple design that looks good.Thanks.
     
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  6. Jackie_W

    Jackie_W Well-Known Member

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    lol thanks... now just need some votes right? ;)
     
    Jackie_W, Dec 15, 2008 IP
  7. justinlorder

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    Hey, guy . The site loads very very slowly . I can't wait to review it .
    The header looks a bit uncomfortable . Try to adjust the height of the header and make the header larger .
     
    justinlorder, Dec 15, 2008 IP
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    #8
    To make the site look better you should customize it, you should
    change up the color scheme and get a professional logo.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 15, 2008 IP
  9. want2achieve

    want2achieve Well-Known Member

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    Hi, Please also tell me, how we monetize it?
     
    want2achieve, Dec 16, 2008 IP
  10. Jackie_W

    Jackie_W Well-Known Member

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    article marketing works for me - ad adsense ads to your site and work on builing traffic
     
    Jackie_W, Dec 16, 2008 IP
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    lycos Well-Known Member

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    For me, the green color tone looks too bright and distracting. I prefer soft colors instead.
     
    lycos, Dec 16, 2008 IP
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    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    #12
    Good colour combintaion, and nice site

    Where it says [x] Readers by Feedburner, you may want to move this next to the stats on the right.

    Apart from that the site looks good.

    Good Luck with the site.

    Kind Regards.
     
    mrhrk01, Dec 29, 2008 IP
  13. want2achieve

    want2achieve Well-Known Member

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    Thanks mate!
     
    want2achieve, Dec 29, 2008 IP
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    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    No worries, here to help, if you need any advice just PM me

    Kind Regards
     
    mrhrk01, Jan 1, 2009 IP
  15. river

    river Active Member

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    One thing you definitely should do is move the feedburner button to the sidebar. I doesn't look right overlapping the tabs.
     
    river, Jan 1, 2009 IP