Please review my site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by nice4, Dec 22, 2008.

  1. tammylandreth

    tammylandreth Peon

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    #21
    This may come off harsh sounding, but it's an honest evaluation from my perspective.

    Maybe do some blog links about the shoes, add more content by rewriting some articles. Still WAY too many ads and don't quite understand the forums point - maybe stick with a blog theme and allow comments on articles as this subject matter prob won't have a life expectancy that you can use for a long time. Way easy to comment after you read an article, way too much work to switch over to a forum and post, yes - i'm lazy, just like most readers will be :)

    And we know the site is bushshoes.org - don't really have to tell us with 4 additional pics that take up valuable space and bandwidth/time to remind us every 4 inches where we are at -- really, we know.

    Lots of repetitive statements, would have been just as easy to write an editorial on the subject.

    It really looks like you had very little content, and you knew it. Rather than MAKE some content with an article or two and some research - you wanted to fill the space up with something, anything. And then you went ahead and did just that.

    If you just want to monetize from this without a lot of effort on your part, consider making it short and sweet with some google down the side so they can come in to read the info and click out easy on a google ad. Cut the forum out altogether.

    If you want to make it a quality site, maybe put a quick blog up and scrape/rewrite some articles and put up some more games - but still lose the forum.


    Just suggestions, it's your vision - so make your vision what you want it to be.
    Tammy
     
    tammylandreth, Dec 24, 2008 IP
  2. kumo

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    #22
    The idea is nice but the page layout and display need to rearrange so that it looks professional and neat.
     
    kumo, Dec 24, 2008 IP
  3. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #23
    Thanks tammylandreth
    I Will Try To Spend More Time To Correct What You Tell About.
    And I like To Have More Idea From You About It.

     
    nice4, Dec 24, 2008 IP
  4. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #24
    Thanks kumo.
    I Will..

     
    nice4, Dec 24, 2008 IP
  5. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #25
    Hi For All
    I Make Few Change For The WebSite.
    See By Your Self..
    Thanks.
     
    nice4, Dec 25, 2008 IP
  6. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #26
    Hi
    More Update For The Web Site Just Upload it Now.
    Thanks
     
    nice4, Dec 25, 2008 IP
  7. xRustySpoon

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    #27
    The idea behind the site is good, but the site design/layout itself blows.
     
    xRustySpoon, Dec 25, 2008 IP
  8. cyberxtremer

    cyberxtremer Peon

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    #28
    The design looks a decade old
     
    cyberxtremer, Dec 25, 2008 IP
  9. lycos

    lycos Well-Known Member

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    #29
    I can't believe you actually created a site specially for the whole incident :D
    I tried to scan through and read the content but after a while got a bit dizzy. I think it's the contrast on the color of the font placed on the dark background
     
    lycos, Dec 26, 2008 IP
  10. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #30
    Thanks For:

    lycos
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    cyberxtremer
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    xRustySpoon

    I Just Make The Web Site In 1 day And I will Try To Make It More Interesting Day By Day With More News.
    The Site Look Old Because I Am Old ( Around 60 Years Old )
    Give Me More Idea Please( Dont Just Say Look Like This Or Like That)
    Thank You...
     
    nice4, Dec 26, 2008 IP
  11. d35i9n

    d35i9n Member

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    #31
    my review is that the website idea is horrible. yeah maybe if you would of made this website the day the shoe attack happened it would get some good traffic, but the news is already old. did you see the game that had a million hits? it came out right away and then the owners sold it...ofcourse they did its not like it would get another million views the story is old and no one cares
     
    d35i9n, Dec 26, 2008 IP
  12. contactusa

    contactusa Active Member

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    #32
    The site is so, so. But the shoe... If we could only get every other person to throw their shoes at this War Criminal, maybe he would have gone away sooner.
     
    contactusa, Dec 26, 2008 IP
  13. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #33
    Yes d35i9n..
    I Have A Good Traffic Too.. I Make The Website After 2days Frome the shoe attack.
    thanks for you

     
    nice4, Dec 26, 2008 IP
  14. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #34
    Hello For all..
    I Update The Web Site What You Think Now?
     
    nice4, Dec 27, 2008 IP
  15. SexTheNet

    SexTheNet Peon

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    #35
    I think it is either my connection or your site that is messed up. I cant reach the site and this is the second time today I get a timout...
     
    SexTheNet, Dec 28, 2008 IP
  16. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #36
    Hi (SexTheNet)
    I Think Is Your Connection Have Problem... Any Way Thanks For You

     
    nice4, Dec 30, 2008 IP
  17. mrhrk01

    mrhrk01 Well-Known Member

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    #37
    Nice idea for the site

    Best of luck with the site!

    Kind Regards
     
    mrhrk01, Dec 31, 2008 IP
  18. nice4

    nice4 Active Member

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    #38
    Thank You (mrhrk01)
    I will Update It Allways..

     
    nice4, Jan 1, 2009 IP
  19. bryanski

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    #39
    Too many colored text. The colors don't look good together. And in my Opera browser, everything is in the left side of the screen. i don't know why.
     
    bryanski, Jan 2, 2009 IP
  20. mousavisepehr

    mousavisepehr Peon

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    #40
    thanks . your idea help me a lot
     
    mousavisepehr, Jan 2, 2009 IP