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for which site the paradisehookah.com or wholesaleptp.com

 

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When I entered my zip code for shipping charges.

 

Looks good. I think things like Privacy/About Us and so on should be separated.
That's it. Your prices are quite affordable.
Good luck!

 

oh i tried it and it works..
idk why but you can only access the site by typing www.wholesaleptp.com
if you use http://wholesaleptp.com it doesnt work?? idk why..

ya i am going to seperate those tabs but its going to stretch the site out and i dont like that : (

thanks guys for the comments..

 

you site is a little dull and generic

1. why is there a black background where the "go" button is on the products page
2. Update the copyright
3. add "contact us" form
4. use a little bit bigger fonts
5. the preview images on the products are too small and it looks distorted...make it a little bigger

hope that helps

 

wouldnt load for me..

 

ya you have to use www.wholesaleptp.com

you cant just use http://wholesaleptp.com

i dont know what the reason for that is?? : (

 

Like tendulkar2 said the font size looks a bit big and also the web design sort of reminds me of a web page selling me an ebook. Not that thats a bad thing, but I think its pretty decent. Just doesn't have that professional shopping feel to the web template and it took me like 5 seconds to load your page or is that just me?

 

Dude.....it's not that great.
It does not look professional enough to instill trust in potential buyers.
The second one looks much better, but even still.....you need to check out a few examples and take another stab at it.

There are things that buyers look for besides design that you have not considered.

A Privacy Policy.
A Real Address
A Customer Service Phone Number (If you are shipping your own product.)

Check out some other retail sites and get some design ideas..you site needs a little work .
JMO

 

alright guys i did a little work on my website wholesaleptp.com
please check it out and review what i have done..
in the about us page i have put the about us, contact us, and privacy all in one page because i cant make more links or it will mess up the page.. if you have a suggestion to what i should call that page that has all 3 things..
thank you