Wooohooo Finally Got It Check It Out : ) Plzzz

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by sanaa-s-1971, Dec 16, 2008.

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Do you shop online?

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  1. #1
    I got a my website up and it looks great --at least thats what i think haha..

    please check it out and comment on anything to improve on or if it looks good..
    thanks..


    http://www.wholesaleptp.com
    Code (markup):

    the full name is wholesale products to public


    besides that please check out the products and see what i can add or take off or if anyone would buy my items..

    there are a lot at low prices lol..

    thanks for reading guys..

    Have Fun.. :)
     
    sanaa-s-1971, Dec 16, 2008 IP
  2. Playswfgames

    Playswfgames Peon

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    i dont think it looks that good but its allright
    copyright 2007 in footer might want to be changed (just a small thing but i noticed it...)

    where do you get your products from :D
     
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  3. sanaa-s-1971

    sanaa-s-1971 Peon

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    im just using a simple shopping cart its not bad though compared to others..

    oh lol.. ya i do need to change that haha thanks for the pointer.. :)

    i get them from wholesales around.. LA

     
    sanaa-s-1971, Dec 16, 2008 IP
  4. Sikenzjura

    Sikenzjura Member

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  5. Janck

    Janck Active Member

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    #5
    Nothing special, when designing this kind of web pages you need to earn buyers trust, and probably the first step to do that is with good design.
     
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  6. Jackie_W

    Jackie_W Well-Known Member

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    #6
    site looks generic to me...

    you boast about being "one of the premier online "Wholesale to Public" websites" but have no pagerank....

    also you say on front page "no handling fees" - i added a test item to cart and checkout showed $2.00 handling!

    you need to add a privacy policy too...
     
    Jackie_W, Dec 17, 2008 IP
  7. sanaa-s-1971

    sanaa-s-1971 Peon

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  8. sanaa-s-1971

    sanaa-s-1971 Peon

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    #8
    everyone does that not a big deal.. im changing that pretty soon its because i had not time and i just put something on and got it up..

    ya my mistake about the handling fee


     
    sanaa-s-1971, Dec 17, 2008 IP
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    You should get a more professional template and a professional logo to make
    the site look better.
     
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  10. Sikenzjura

    Sikenzjura Member

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    Yep I found this, IMHO it should be more obvious, because user is spending time trying to understand if he need this item and if he is ready to spend some money, and then it appears to be absent, quite annoying. By the way I've got to this page from the main page, so you promoting absent good on the main, that's strange.
     
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  11. sarirejo

    sarirejo Well-Known Member

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    http://www. wholesaleptp. com/ page2.cfm

    who are you?
     
    sarirejo, Dec 17, 2008 IP
  12. iwonitlive

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    Personally I think you should of spent more time preparing the site before launching and having a lot of omissions. To me layout needs to be wider, the items feel like they are on top of each other.

    The about us page is non-exsistant

    I would say needs more work
     
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  13. sanaa-s-1971

    sanaa-s-1971 Peon

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    #13
    i havent launched the site yet.. i just wanted to reviews.. i am going to complete it soon..


     
    sanaa-s-1971, Dec 17, 2008 IP
  14. sanaa-s-1971

    sanaa-s-1971 Peon

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    i fixed it and when you click on a catergory and you see the products..
    under the product price it says the quantity :)

     
    sanaa-s-1971, Dec 17, 2008 IP
  15. sanaa-s-1971

    sanaa-s-1971 Peon

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  16. Highena.com

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    #16
    The second one looks much better than the first. whoelsaleptp looks a bit dated.
     
    Highena.com, Dec 18, 2008 IP
  17. sanaa-s-1971

    sanaa-s-1971 Peon

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    #17
    ya thats what i thought.
    but paradisehookah i thought looked good only for the hookah products i have which it does : )
    but for the wholesaleptp i tried it and it didnt look good with the products i have..
     
    sanaa-s-1971, Dec 18, 2008 IP
  18. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #18
    The first design is not good.I think, the site relating to sales should have more design inorder to attract the vistors on their first visit.But the site you designed second(paradisehookah) is qualified for the above comment.It looks cool and tends to look on the products mentioned there.Thanks.
     
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  19. Freelance GD

    Freelance GD Well-Known Member

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    #19
    The site is ok. I don't really want to break your heart. But some improvements can always be made :)

    • Get a store/site logo.
    • Get a new header designed or design it by yourself if you are a designer(catchy, trendy).
    • Don't use Times New Roman (atleast it doesn't work for me).
    • Use normal font size (pt 10 or may be 12)
    • Put some graphics there (it looks empty for me :))

    Hope that helps. Thank you
     
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  20. tendulkar2

    tendulkar2 Banned

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    Site looks simple and easy to navigate..but, the font size looks little big.
     
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