Landing Page Review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by BlueDevilMedia, Nov 9, 2007.

  1. #1
    Please review my new Harry Potter landing page.

    Suggestions on monetization is greatly appreciated!
     
    BlueDevilMedia, Nov 9, 2007 IP
  2. creative4w3

    creative4w3 Active Member

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    If I were you, I'd put a centered banner above the entire thing. But other than that, without totally spamming it up, I can't think of anything else. You already did well with the links on the left.
     
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  3. drunnells

    drunnells Peon

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    I agree, looks great! The adsense linkbox blends in perfectly!
     
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    results_assured Peon

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    Hi,

    good site when it comes to images, consolidation. A lil slow - took about 8 sec to open. might want to add colors...
    Regards
     
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  5. kjarva

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    I think it looks good, simple and easy on the eye and a great layout.
     
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  6. BlueDevilMedia

    BlueDevilMedia Well-Known Member

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    hmmm I've tested it on several different workstations and it seems to load within 2 seconds on all.

    Anyone else having problems with it loading slowly?
     
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    aryst Guest

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    Maybe you can add a short description about harry potter on the left side bar...that will be good for new surfer who never know the history of harry potter...
     
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    UKmember Well-Known Member

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    Great Landing page by far colours and logos are very good. Its also very eye catching.

    Great work A++ from me

    UKmember
     
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  9. Webaccess

    Webaccess Peon

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    Pretty good. maybe you can make the user's mouse hand be shaped like a wand. It would be a nice effect that would go well with your theme.
     
    Webaccess, Nov 10, 2007 IP
  10. wilfordsy

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    Very nice! A typical internet browser wouldn't even know the affiliate links. The header are top notch and high quality. Great work on the google links on the left side.

    Suggestions for improvement:
    Add more harry potter related stuffs for seo purposes ;)
     
    wilfordsy, Nov 10, 2007 IP
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    looks pretty good. google adsense box really blends with the page buttons
     
    greatbizideas, Nov 11, 2007 IP
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    bobbyswebzone Peon

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    Looks good and the adsense too gels well with the site
     
    bobbyswebzone, Nov 15, 2007 IP
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    5ynaptic Peon

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    Looks great. Page loads very quickly. Images and colors are fluid. Adsense isn't too noticeable. I would howver add a few informative links about Harry Potter or a sequence of books on the left nav bar. It'll help extend the bar downward and give a bit more content to deceive the visitor into the belief that the landing page is part of a much larger website.
     
    5ynaptic, Nov 15, 2007 IP
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    Looks pretty good.
     
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  15. life31

    life31 Active Member

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    Too good.... wonderful.....
    No where it seems like you are tying to promote anything not even with adsense.
    Great work.
     
    life31, Nov 16, 2007 IP
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    Pretty good.

    Only things i could suggest is perhaps add "Prices from $xx.xx" and some unique content previewing the series on the left.
     
    Fixxxer, Nov 17, 2007 IP
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    idk its ok.. i guess
     
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  18. BlueDevilMedia

    BlueDevilMedia Well-Known Member

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    Thanks lol
     
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    prowritinggirl Banned

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    Pretty good :) Very interesting concept.
     
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    Good work buddy, nicely blended ads, its perfect. Do some high pitch marketing, and I'm sure you will earn good money from adSense.
     
    Bblogger, Mar 11, 2008 IP