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Discussion in 'Websites' started by mark123456, Oct 19, 2007.

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    I'm pretty new to web design, but after my pathetic first two sites I decided to get my act together. I learned some CSS and XHTML, and am wondering if you guys can give me a critique this time around.

    http://oversite.org
     
    mark123456, Oct 19, 2007 IP
  2. jkrish41

    jkrish41 Banned

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    #2
    Very nice!

    Maybe put something in middle of space on contact page to fill it?
     
    jkrish41, Oct 19, 2007 IP
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    wisdomtool Moderator Staff

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    I think it is super neat, but there is a big yellow box on top, you may want to fill something in.
     
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    mirturk Active Member

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    #4
    nice but I yhink you should remove textlinks of the botom or you should decrease of their font size.
     
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    I like it, but I don't like the empty yellow space. If there was something else there like text,cartoon,image...would look more appealing to the eye
     
    andrewpatrick, Oct 19, 2007 IP
  6. mark123456

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    yeah, im going to fill that yellow space with adsense once i get around to it. I also like the suggestion about fixing the text links, I'll change them 2morrow. Thanks a lot for the suggestions.
     
    mark123456, Oct 19, 2007 IP
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    Ponynugget Peon

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    #7
    Hi Mark,

    If you're going to put AdSense in that box you should decrease the size of it. It probably would attract a lot of clicks but it sure would look ugly. I think the three Guides, Newsletters and Partners buttons would be much more suited in the yellow box. You could then fill the space where the buttons were with a blog or something else.

    Everything else looks good though. :)
    Liam
     
    Ponynugget, Oct 19, 2007 IP
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    #8
    really nice design :)
     
    alpercankaya, Oct 20, 2007 IP
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    #9
    Nice design but i suggest not to put a white rectangle . I feel it doesnt fit well and perhaps making the homepage a bit more filled content wise? Just add more About oversite description
     
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    Hey it is not available................
    ??
     
    flickerman, Oct 20, 2007 IP
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    It worked fine when I checked it this morning and last night.

    Thanks everybody for your input, when I revise the site in a week or so I'll apply most of the changes you suggested. Any more feedback is appreciated.
     
    mark123456, Oct 21, 2007 IP
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    The layout of the site is confusing and akward. Is there supposed to be content where the yellow space is, next to the links to the left?
     
    Selfemploymentsecrets, Oct 21, 2007 IP
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    Very nice indeed. Where the yellow rectangle on the top next to the navigation, use rounded corners on the right side of the yellow rectangle. It only has rounded corners on the left side... (on IE7).

    Congrats on the site.
     
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    I like the colors that you choose...

    Very nice work...
     
    blackhumor, Oct 21, 2007 IP
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    neilparnham Well-Known Member

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    read your putting adsense in the yellow bit, but the top logo font , im not sure about the rest of the site looks sleak and well done but the font i dont think does, maybe a reflective style up there with a different font, good work thou, neil.
     
    neilparnham, Oct 21, 2007 IP