Compare online dvd rental - online video game rental

[nightmare5liter]

Just wanted to get some feedback. I have been working on the site as much as possible, A full time job(more than full time) kept me from working on it much.

Online dvd rental
Video game rental

If you reply to this post please consider the following.

1.If you see any problems keep in mind your screen resolution, browser, and os if you know them, I want to be compatable with all browsers and screen sizes.
(The site is designed for 1024 x 768 and above resolution. I am aware that the text may be too large if the scree is any smaller than that and am working on adding a text size option)
(I am also aware of a formating problem with firefox in the store section
and a problem with the left menu in ie in the store section)

2. Is the layout appealing or would you immediately close the page?

3.If you were looking for these kind of services would you find the information useful?

4.Is site navigation adequate?

5.From an seo point of view, is the site properly optimized? The site ranks well in msn and is starting to move up in yahoo however this does not bring much traffic. Google completely ignores my main keywords but occasional ranks pages for searches with very few results. Particularly, in the store section, where my site almost always ranks as the last result shown
(example: Showing 350 - 354 of 66,000, just before it asks to see similar pages)

As a note I believe that I may be still sandboxed the sit is a little over 10 mos. old or penalized for only having the domain registerd for 1 year. I am about to transfer the domain and register for 2 or more years.

www.dvdwebzone.com is pr4 with 214 links in google
video-game-rental.dvdwebzone.com is pr5 with over 1000 links in google.

Thank you.

[fsmedia]

For your main site, the design is not very attractive at all. I suggest a redesign.

The menu, especially, needs some work in the header. The site just has an 'amateur' feeling to it to me.

A lot of the text overlays each other too, makes it unappealing.

[forumrating]

start working with ur logo and header , u need to do updates to the design or take off with a new skin.

[fryman]

Yuck... gray background... black letters... can't be duller...

Spice it up, dude

[nightmare5liter]

Made some more changes and I would like to know everyone thinks.

One thing I've noticed is that this thread is now #1 in google for one of my keywords.

[richweb2007]

Hey Man, your websites are not attractive . can not convince user to read more about your site..

I advise you to change colour combinitions and add some attractive images as it looks text text text and link link link..

[gharibe]

good
keep working on theme

www.dvdwebzone.com is pr4 with 214 links in google

you valid pr is 3