Contest $15/24hrs. Make this graphic pretty. First good job wins!

I have a graphic that I want to make look more professional and all around more sexy. Its a graphic that demonstrates a methodology.



Obviously I want to keep the 'substance' of the graphic., ie the number of circles, the links/connections and directions. Also this is a graph (x and y plane). Everything else though is completely up to your great sense of design.

Again, the first one that I see that works will win. So speed is of the essence. I will be checking frequently all day.

Suggestions: I would like to see someone attempt a 'gears/cogs' version. But very much want to see you let your creativity out on this. So have it guys and gals.

Thanks very much!!!

 

mine..

 

My Entry :

 

Another Version With Color Variation :



Please Provide a FeedBack

 

masjacky - I like the gloss and color scheme. Can you add the graph details (x and y plane etc..) and the one link (top right) needs to be dotted or seperated.

khnfrhn - Your second attempt is great. Can you add gloss and use the same colour scheme as masjacky. Also watch your alignment, the first set of circles should be slightly lower than the last.

Both - I need to resize the graphic so vector formats would be fabulous. Thanks!

 

here's my version..

 

vishu - Looks good. A few requests. Please change the title bar to a blue and make it much longer. Also can you change the style of the yellow arrowheads to a curved arrow. Lastly please use different colours for the three sets of circles.

For everyone - as i mentioned speed is of the essence, whoever gets back with the revisions first is likely to win!

 

Ill give it a try

 

Dementic - Great Job! Can you make the arrows curved and the one arrow (blue to red) dotted.

 

Did you mean to change only the big arrows ? or all of them ?

 

I meant all of them. Just curve them a bit, like the others. I want to stay away from the hand drawn/comic sans style as it will be a serious graph. Cheers!

 

Hey do you like this style, if you do i can make the rest of it. Just tell me

 

like this ?

 

No. I don't want the curvy hand drawn style. I want the arrows to be slightly curved like masjacky's.

 

i hope this is better, if not, please try to point exactly at what arrows do you talk about and what do you mean as round, so i could do it to your match your desire.

 

Ok thats better. Now the BIG green and BIG red arrows need to match the small arrows. Skinny and slightly straighter. Lastly the BIG blue arrow needs the same thing, but do not lose the dottedness.

Thanks

 

Thanks for the Feedback :

Alignment is now Perfect Scale Measured. Thanks for pointing out that.
Used the Color Scheme you suggested and tried to put a Different Gloss Look, Hope you like it!

REVISED :

 

Another One :

 

Another Revision