Please Review My Landing Page

Hi everyone here, good to see you

This is my first time to promote my own product, I want to get a good starting. So, can you be so kind to do a review for my landing page?

My Landing Page For Adwords: http://videodownloadwizard.com/lp1/

Waiting for your valuable advice

Thanks a million

 

I think the page is nice.

 

good funnelled sales page. I suggest however to make those wMV, WAV icons more clear, not human readable at first attempt

 

Godmode! Thanks a lot for your reviews. I think we should use a clear icon for each format, instead of using the same icon for all

 

I think it looks good!

 

I like it

Great stuff

 

Think its ok. There is too much going on on the page though (especially on the right). I also think you should remove the FLV ^ TO graphic in the upper right corner and replace it by the download button which is now under the headline. This way the page would be a lot better.

 

Like the layout of your downloadpage much better

 

Nice looking. It is better if the images on the right are clickable and the link is towards to your affiliates.

 

Hi. Good stuff. Few pointers: dont use images unless you have to. Design feature images look great, but do they help conversion? Use a big "Dowload Now" button.

 

I have seen many landing pages, some good, some bad, some really good. I would rate this as likely to convert very well and is very good. Good luck! It is a free download which will give you tons of conversions hopefully.
Make sure you track conversions. Check out yourwebgurus.com if you do not know how to do this.

 

If it were me, I would not download this product because of poor English use. The first thing I see is:

Easy Download.... etc... (didn't want to type out the whole line)

This being the first thing I see/read, I know that the person is not real versed in English and it turns me off. This is just my personal opinion. Everything else looks good.

 

Great job on it, clear call to action, and smooth design. Very nice.

 

Nice Job loooks god

 

I think the overall structure of the site is pretty good. There's a good amount of content as well as sub pages which will help with your quality. Not sure about the landing page though, in my opinion i wouldn't use it it seems to cluttered and the call to action is not clear enough. Try split testing between different landing page designs and see what works best.

 

It's pretty, but it's a bridge page and isn't what google wants.

Try comparing download programs, (an area they don't really like in the first place).

You have to add some unique content and not have all your links pointing to one place. I predict it will get a lowish qs and probably be slapped after google gives it a test run of a day or two.

 

Nice to read and easy on the eye!

 

Pretty good, I guess it's ready for launch?

 

Thanks for all of your reviews, and we have optimized it

 

All-in-one Video Downloader + Converter + Player

That font with that color is killing it.

Also try to change the regular bullet points for something more appealing like those red arrows on the page.