Post your website link, and I will give you suggestions to make it better.

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    Post one link, I will give suggestions.

    No adult, warez, etc.

    I am offering this service just to help... The thing is... If you don't make the website, you won't see it how someone else will see it.

    These are genuine suggestions, I'm not going to suggest stupid stuff or buy my service to make your website better, etc, etc.
     
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    Hi waterbottle,

    I'm early in the development of this site, but welcome suggestions:

    http://www.diytechblog.com

    Sorry, I cannot have live links yet, I'm new to the forum.

    Thanks
     
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  9. waterbottle

    waterbottle Peon

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    #9
    my suggestions:

    -if you're going to have a block of 6 ads on the website, and you only have 5 to put on there, repeat one unless it's not ppc.
    -the header should be larger, it's not large enough. (taller, not wider)
    -the banner ad at the top right should be under the header.
    -color code your ad with like www.perezhilton.com, it will look much better, and appear as part of the content to some people, causing you to get more clicks!
    -get rid of that ugly space at the bottom.
    -change the "back to top" part at the bottom right to an up arrow that is blue, or just a ^ will look better than that ugly wording/font.
    -use this calendar for the date http://www.quadletterdomains.com/. yours sucks.
    -it's best if your wordpress theme informatoin is in the middle, after the page box. it looks messy there.

    not saying you're stupid... but by the looks of your blog, most of these changes are obvious, and you would have probably fixed them if you knew how. if you don't know how to change them, pay someone, or get someone to help you because if your website doesn't look good, the traffic will think of you as spam, and won't return as much. also, less chances of being bookmarked/favorited.

    i will give you more changes if you actually make these changes. your site needs a lot of work before any REAL internet user will take it seriously.
     
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  10. waterbottle

    waterbottle Peon

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    by the looks of your website you don't seem too experienced. by the date on your last post, august 15th, i can tell that you aren't serious about this website. i will not waste my time on a website you don't take seriously.

    i mean... you spelled "information" wrong in the header.
     
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  11. waterbottle

    waterbottle Peon

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    here are my suggestions:

    -http://www.adsence-websites.com/ link at bottom is suspeded. did you spell it wrong?
    -your page needs structure. some "walls" would be good to display that the page ends on the right and left side. also, on the bottom, so you can put the copyright information below that.
    -if you follow the above suggestion, then you need a light grey/gradient background to contrast the website content and the background.
    -center the text in your header. that header is okay for now, but not close to great. take a look at headers of other websites to get ideas. it needs to be taller (not wider), and be LEGIBLE. legibility is VERY important.
    -what does your domain mean? does it relate to the webiste? if not, change the domain.
    -i suggest that you get rid of the ad towards the top left, and put a long ad on the right side that goes down the page. you will get more views, more clicks, and look less like a spam website.
    -define the nav bar so it looks like buttons and not words. maybe just put a line inbetween each word to start off?
    -this is the phishing scams page: http://www.coigach.net/phishingscams.php. you need to put "PHISHING SCAMS" at the top, above the paragraph, and center the words. it looks like a spam site without it.
    -unbold the text in the content, it's ugly.

    if you do all these changes, i will tell you more. until then, that's all.
     
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  12. waterbottle

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    too spammy, don't care to rate it. it's obviously a site that you just want ad revenue on, and you don't care for the visitors, haha...

    when you get serious, let me know.
     
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    This is my first attempt at a website to promote my elottery business.

    I know theres prob alot of flaws but your help would be much appreciated.

    http://www.planetlotto.co.uk
     
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  14. waterbottle

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    one of the better sites in this thread, but not impressive at all. my suggestions:

    -live help button needs new location, and icon. no matter where you put that ugly picture, it's going to look unprofessional and spammy. think of something, or make something new.
    -take off the paypal seal. just keep the paypal icon there. nobody gives a damn if you're verified or not. and if your website looks good, they'll assume you're verified, and wont question you.
    -the all rights reserved part should be at the bottom right on that blue footer. not on the white box part.
    -get rid of those STUPID uptime trackers. NOBODY CARES. do any of the large companies have it? no. you have it because you're a small company with low confidence and you're trying to prove to the customer that you are good. let them trust you with a geniunely nice website and nice content.
    -get rid of the money back guarantee seal. looks spammy.
    -UNBOLD ALL OF THE TEXT, SERIOUSLY.
    -the domain register field should be wider.
    -why do you have the two domain names at the top right? take them out. they serve no purpose.

    i have more suggestions, but i won't give them unless these changes are made. if you make these changes, i will give more suggestions.
     
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    terrible website. my suggestions are:

    -get rid of the red text. it's stupid, childish, and spammy looking.
    -make the background a grey/white/grey gradient.
    -capitalize the first letter "home" and "contact us".
    -unbold the text in the content, and just make the hyperlinks dark blue.
    -the text at the bottom is tiny. make it larger.
    -capitalize the first letter of each word in the page title. it currently reads "planet lotto"

    toooooo many more changes to make. change these, and i'll give you more suggestions.
     
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    :p :p :p :p
     
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    Hei waterbottle, you haven't reviewed my site :). Show me some tips! :)
     
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  19. waterbottle

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    kixmc3,

    i had a long one done for you, but my internet messed up and i had to restart. :(

    i'll redo it tomorrow.
     
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    Ok, no proble, ;). I'll wait until tomorow! :)
     
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