Need some one to rewrite sales letter

Discussion in 'Content Creation' started by lilianchen, Sep 22, 2008.

0
  1. #1
    Payment by paypal
    My budget 5 USD - 100 USD per page

    Job offer :
    Please re-write salles letter
    Write for 4-5 paragraph
    Attractive sales letter


    The first job :
    Re-write sales letter at cutfatnow[dot]com

    Please PM me if you have handle this job
     
    lilianchen, Sep 22, 2008 IP
  2. veneficuz

    veneficuz Peon

    Messages:
    386
    Likes Received:
    4
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #2
    Hey Anchen, I'm no copywriter by any means, but have a lot of succesful sales pages. And It looks like your design and "flow" of the site need a little help. I didn't see a huge problem with your Pitch, but the layout of the site needs a little help. I don't really have the time to go into detail, but first off try to change the font to Arial or Verdena, and put a darker color backround to add contrast, most of this is web design 101.

    Give me a PM I may have a little time to give it a harder look tommorow afternoon.
     
    veneficuz, Sep 22, 2008 IP
  3. slick4788

    slick4788 Peon

    Messages:
    37
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #3
    That girl needs to be removed. Seems too salesperson-esque.
     
    slick4788, Sep 22, 2008 IP
  4. lilianchen

    lilianchen Peon

    Messages:
    610
    Likes Received:
    4
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #4
    job offer is closed ... I get my freelance . USername VTTE
     
    lilianchen, Sep 24, 2008 IP