Please review my Website

greenwing72

Aug 21st 2008, 12:08 pm

I have a website I would like you all to review. Please let me know what you think as far as overall appearance as well as marketability.

www.adultbusinesskit.com

mdalangin

Aug 21st 2008, 2:31 pm

I don't like that business .. sorry.

bobbylove321

Aug 21st 2008, 5:49 pm

I like the design and layouts. The pictures were good and the black background was also a smart decision. However, I would say you need better copywriting on the sales page. It didn't make me "want" to give you my money. Make it more convincing.

tarzan007

Aug 21st 2008, 7:57 pm

i surely liked it. if possible add some glitter (only on borders)

dominion4040

Aug 21st 2008, 8:37 pm

I like the design and layouts. The pictures were good and the black background was also a smart decision. However, I would say you need better copywriting on the sales page. It didn't make me "want" to give you my money. Make it more convincing.

Bobbylove nailed it. Might want to add some more SERP flavored content to be chewed on by spiders.